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Cascading Ribbons

. Translucent ice melts Into white satin ribbons Angel tresses flow

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations Carrie, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! "...white satin ribbons ..." Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:43:00 PM

Carrie, this was great writing. Glad it made the list! andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 9:55:00 AM

Awesome spiritual #10 Carrie. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:43:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Carrie! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/3/2010 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement with this fine poem, Carrie.!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:09:00 PM

Carrie, Wow, this is such a beautiful haiku. Your imagery is outstanding! Congratulations on your dersiving win. Cascade means "Waterfall" in French, and is one of the only French words I know. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:31:00 AM

Carrie, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 8:54:00 AM

Lovely descriptive phrases for this beautiful picture. Congratulations on your winning words. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:35:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul'c contest .. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy.. with such lovely words of description in your Haiku... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Carrie. Love,Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/3/2010 3:21:00 AM

Nice imagery you have depicted here, Carrie. My congratulations to you. (^_^) Noel.

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:41:00 AM

Carrie, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 3/1/2010 8:07:00 AM

Nicely written Haiku with great concept and smooth flow... Kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2010 9:11:00 AM

Hey you are rocking the haiku today Carrie. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2010 4:44:00 AM

Great and creative Haiku that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara