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Cascading Ribbons

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                                 Translucent ice melts

                           Into white satin ribbons 

                    Angel tresses flow

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2010

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 3/7/2010 12:07:00 PM Congratulations Carrie, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! "...white satin ribbons ..." Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/4/2010 1:43:00 PM Carrie, this was great writing. Glad it made the list! andrea Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/4/2010 9:55:00 AM Awesome spiritual #10 Carrie. Congratulations, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 3/3/2010 9:43:00 PM So very nice Haiku! Carrie! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline. Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 3/3/2010 7:43:00 PM Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 3/3/2010 5:14:00 PM Congratulations on your placement with this fine poem, Carrie.! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/3/2010 12:09:00 PM Carrie, Wow, this is such a beautiful haiku. Your imagery is outstanding! Congratulations on your dersiving win. Cascade means "Waterfall" in French, and is one of the only French words I know. Blessings, Connie Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/3/2010 11:31:00 AM Carrie, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 3/3/2010 8:54:00 AM Lovely descriptive phrases for this beautiful picture. Congratulations on your winning words. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/3/2010 5:35:00 AM Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul'c contest .. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy.. with such lovely words of description in your Haiku... luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/3/2010 3:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Carrie. Love,Carol Login to Reply

Noel Villarosa Date: 3/3/2010 3:21:00 AM Nice imagery you have depicted here, Carrie. My congratulations to you. (^_^) Noel. Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 3/3/2010 1:41:00 AM Carrie, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

Anna-Marie Docherty Date: 3/1/2010 8:07:00 AM Nicely written Haiku with great concept and smooth flow... Kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/25/2010 9:11:00 AM Hey you are rocking the haiku today Carrie. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/25/2010 4:44:00 AM Great and creative Haiku that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 2/24/2010 5:47:00 PM Carrie~ Very very nice Haiku good luck in the contest! Laura :) Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/24/2010 5:28:00 PM very beautiful, I need to try one on this picture. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/24/2010 4:33:00 PM Marvelous imagery, Carrie! Very creative haiku that should excel in the contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 2/24/2010 1:23:00 PM Fabulous Haiku, Carrie! Should do real well on the contest. And thanks for the kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline. Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 2/24/2010 11:53:00 AM Nice one Login to Reply