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Carpet Ride

I took my saw then cut you into two, both parts saying, I love you. A poof from a cloud you disappeared, Then I pulled you out from a tragedy. With our lips touching you magically appeared, then the stars from heaven gave me life. Without one glance I knew you became, my magic carpet ride. As the years passed by, you then became my wife and changed my life. With the past now present let it be known, I Love You! My Sweet Magical, Carpet Ride. Contest: The Mystical Dream Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date Created: 10/06/2022

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Date: 10/6/2022 6:05:00 PM
so sweet ~ a wonderful love poem
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Bobby May
Date: 10/6/2022 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Line, I can always count on you for a comment my sweet friend!
Date: 10/6/2022 4:55:00 PM
Hi Bobby….i really like this poem a carpet ride love story! Ha…Debx
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Bobby May
Date: 10/6/2022 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Deb!
Date: 10/6/2022 9:04:00 AM
Nicely done for the contest. Carpet Ride was enjoyable read. Many blessings.
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Bobby May
Date: 10/6/2022 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Eve,!

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