John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

Carpe Noctem

Up above the moon shines brightly;
starlight touches earth so lightly;
passions teasing impolitely.
Midnight whispers, “Carpe noctem.”

Blowing soft the summer breezes
through her hair as nighttime pleases,
and the moonlight softly teases.
Voices urging, “Carpe noctem.”

Standing close our bodies facing;
hand in hand our fingers lacing;
gentle touches, hearts are racing.
Longings begging, “Carpe noctem.”

Wonder where her thoughts are leading;
do my eyes reveal my pleading?
Will she, with her voice conceding,
whisper softly, “Carpe noctem?”


January 10, 2022
Carpe Noctem - Latin for "seize the night"

Poem of the Week - January 16, 2022

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Jennifer Proxenos June 16, 2022 at 6:46 AM John my dear friend, she undoubtedly heard your whisper, she knows you well and she does concede, for it is you and you alone that she ever wants to 'seize the night' with. Your soul is kind John as is your heart and although your begging and longing can be heard, hers is silent, but just as passionate. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. jENNIFER. John Gondolf June 18, 2022 at 5:04 AM Thank you for this wonderful comment, Jenn, your thoughts make my heart flutter. Hugs, John

Beata Agustin February 18, 2022 at 12:13 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.l John Gondolf February 18, 2022 at 4:26 AM Thank you so much, Beata, I appreciate it. John

Christuraj Alex February 17, 2022 at 7:28 PM Beautiful lesson. Congratulations! John Gondolf February 18, 2022 at 4:26 AM Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate it. John

Eric Cohen February 17, 2022 at 7:17 PM Just outstanding. Best to you. John Gondolf February 18, 2022 at 4:25 AM Thanks, Eric, I appreciate it. John

Margarita Lillico February 17, 2022 at 2:44 PM Johnny, you don't have to bother signing, its your style and imagery and sensuality that shines through :), thank you for participating. Cheers! M. John Gondolf February 18, 2022 at 4:04 AM Thank you for the sweet comments, Maggie, and thanks for hosting the contest. Hugs, Johnny :)

James Inman February 5, 2022 at 5:24 PM Beautifully written John. John Gondolf February 6, 2022 at 5:04 AM Thanks, James, I appreciate it.

Jennifer Fenn February 2, 2022 at 6:28 PM After hearing “carpe diem” so many times, it’s cool to hear the opposite “carpe noctem”. Beautiful, romantic poem. John Gondolf February 3, 2022 at 3:44 AM Thank you, Jennifer, I appreciate it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Valerie Staton January 29, 2022 at 11:39 AM Poem of the Week and noted on the Best 100 Poems list and deservingly so. I enjoyed reading Carpe Noctem. Great imagery. John Gondolf January 29, 2022 at 1:51 PM Thank you so much, Valerie, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my little scribble. John

Bigwin Slot January 27, 2022 at 5:09 PM the top of the best new poems list and as POTW. Thanks Bigwin333 John Gondolf January 27, 2022 at 6:22 PM Thanks, Bigwin, I appreciate it.

Robert Warlov January 25, 2022 at 7:53 AM 'cause love and song must ever soar. John Gondolf January 25, 2022 at 8:07 AM This is so true, Robert, thanks for sharing your thoughts. John

Anais Vionet January 23, 2022 at 8:39 AM This is wonderful because there are some wonderful phrases but the rhyme flows so well it goes almost unnoticed. Did you know this is featured on the 100 best new poems - another bit of magic, Mr. Gondolf My latin is somewhat rusty.. doesn’t “Carpe Noctem” mean “grab the butt?” - if so, I think you have an excellent rap lyric here. =] John Gondolf January 23, 2022 at 1:05 PM Thank you for your kind comments and noticing it was on the best new poems list, Ms Vionet. You’re Latin IS a bit rusty, but you’re translation fits nicely. :) John

Joanna Daniel January 22, 2022 at 3:21 AM This is really wonderful, John, congratulations on your POTW:) very melodious and well-deserving all its glory:) great rhyme scheme you have used:) John Gondolf January 22, 2022 at 4:12 AM Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Jo, I appreciate it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Andrew John January 22, 2022 at 1:27 AM Great one, John. John Gondolf January 22, 2022 at 4:10 AM Thanks, Andrew, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Heidi Sands January 21, 2022 at 4:13 PM This is beautiful John. Congratulations :) John Gondolf January 21, 2022 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Heidi.

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2022 at 4:27 PM and it's POTW?? well, they chose well. John Gondolf January 21, 2022 at 2:31 AM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2022 at 4:26 PM oh my gosh, this is FANTASTIC. one of best I've seen today. FAVE John Gondolf January 21, 2022 at 2:30 AM Thank you so much, Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for saving it as a favorite. John

John Watt January 18, 2022 at 10:54 AM John, this is an outstanding write, and very worthy of its placement at the top of the best new poems list and as POTW. The triplet of rhymes with the recurring Carpe Noctem finish is a captivating form and your meter and flow are always so flawless and natural. A nice twist on the familiar Carpe Diem, and filled with a romantic and sensual vibe. You are such a gifted poet. Love it, and a fave for me ~ John John Gondolf January 19, 2022 at 2:02 AM Thanks so much for the wonderful comments, John, it means a lot coming from such a talented writer as yourself. I am humbled that you have included it in your favorites. John

Malabika Ray Choudhury January 18, 2022 at 5:58 AM Very beautiful - Congratulations on POTW. Romantic and dreamy - really enjoyed! BW ~ Mala John Gondolf January 18, 2022 at 6:04 AM Thank you so much, Mala, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John

John Lawless January 18, 2022 at 5:29 AM The moon as a Latin matchmaker.....very interesting. Beautifully written and a great take on the contest them. John Gondolf January 18, 2022 at 5:48 AM Thanks so much, John I appreciate your comments. John

Unseeking Seeker January 18, 2022 at 3:39 AM Wow John! Carpe noctem indeed it should be, as urged! Congrats on POTW John Gondolf January 18, 2022 at 3:55 AM Thanks so much, I appreciate it.

Gary Radice January 18, 2022 at 12:22 AM Superb poetry John. Congratulations. John Gondolf January 18, 2022 at 1:56 AM Thanks, Gary, I appreciate it. John

Richard Palmer January 17, 2022 at 10:03 AM Seize the night, what a steamy write, check out my Sweet, Sweeter and Sweetest Sensation, think you're gonna enjoy, I enjoyed this to the max John Gondolf January 17, 2022 at 1:14 PM Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Richard, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I found The Sweetest Sensation to be quite an explosion of passion. You might enjoy reading my Summer Sizzle some time. John

Brandy Nicole January 16, 2022 at 3:32 PM As I have told you many times, my dear sweet friend- your words shine. Enjoy your moment in the spotlight. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Week. :) Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf January 16, 2022 at 3:47 PM Thank you again, Brandy, your support means so much, I appreciate you. Hugs, John

Constance La France January 16, 2022 at 2:24 PM John, very nice and congratulations on the POEM OF THE WEEK honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance John Gondolf January 16, 2022 at 2:56 PM Thank you so much, Constance, I appreciate it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John

Bill Baker January 16, 2022 at 11:11 AM Great energy and rhythm in this POTD, Gordon. Congratulations! Goes on to my Favs, Bill John Gondolf January 16, 2022 at 12:24 PM Thanks, Bill, I appreciate it.

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