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A journey with a celestial spell Which takes him to the clouds A one of a kind carousel Which will leave him wowed He holds on tight as he takes the ride On an adventure far away And his horse will simply glide Where he will meet bird at play The carousel will return to Earth As the journey comes to an end But he did get his money's worth And found some feathered friends 4-1-2020 Carousel Picture Prompt Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 4/21/2020 12:16:00 PM
Lovely Joseph - so well penned and very cute - your imagination is truly vivid. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/14/2020 8:44:00 AM
Oh nicely done. A carousel ride through the sky and clouds. I think we have all had a fantasy like that. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/12/2020 8:28:00 AM
Well crafted my friend...I like the tone in your verse...may you have a Happy Easter if you celebrate it...and stay safe my friend...best wishes from the Wingster :o)
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Date: 4/4/2020 8:03:00 PM
this is so sweet, Joseph. I see this contest is filling fast. Oh my. Here I am at home all the time and still can't keep up on comments and poetry writing, hope you are being safe!
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Date: 4/2/2020 3:19:00 PM
I wish I could join him. :) To drift in the tenderness of the sky. To smile and dream, to giggle as the wind dances through my hair. Such a magical place to be. Your thoughts lift me up. Thank you for that. :) Brandy
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Date: 4/2/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thank you Brandy, Your comments are like a poem..
Date: 4/1/2020 1:54:00 PM
You spoke eloquently for the little guy, Joseph. All the best.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/1/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 4/1/2020 1:03:00 PM
Great entry Joseph, best wishes...
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Joseph May
Date: 4/1/2020 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Charlie..
Date: 4/1/2020 9:44:00 AM
This is absolutely charming Joseph, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 4/1/2020 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Jan

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