Carolyn

CAROLYN

I did not really know you; but somehow your comments
about the two poems I entered in your contests stuck
with me and I intuitively sensed good vibes from you.
Your comment on my first gave me encouragement.

Your comment on my second entry gave me delight.
However, the poem I penned for your last contest
“Footprints” Old or New For A Prize” was not accepted
for I was one poem too late at the time I entered.

How can I forget the comment you gave on my poem
“How Can That Be” about my grandmother Dolores .
You stated “I believe Dolores’s spirit visited you before
she died (I’ve had similar premonitions.)”, how can I?

A week before you passed, I saw your face a couple
or a few times and I wondered about your silence, 
why you had not given any contest and tried to shake
these thoughts off and then I heard the news about you.

Your other comment on my poem “How Can That Be”
was “Your entry is fascinating”.  You are the fascinating
one, Carolyn because you did reach me and I do not have
to understand why, like your “The Unexplained” contest.

We met in that contest and you reached out and drew
me back in.  Good bye, beautiful soul for touching me.



8/15/21    Tributes To Carolyn Poetry Contest
                Constance La France
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La France Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Marilene, beautiful and thank you for taking part in the Tributes To Carolyn, your poem is wonderful ~ Constance
Evans Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Thanks, Constance. It is my pleasure.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 3:20 PM
this one is touching and poignant. What a wonderful tribute, Marilene.
Evans Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Have a great evening
Alex Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Good bye, beautiful soul for touching me. Great Tribute.
Evans Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. Have great day.
Agustin Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thanks so much for sharing this, enabling me to know more intimately Carolyn (though I will surely miss her and her uplifting comments). God bless you.
Evans Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Thanks, Beata. Have a Blessed day.
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:28 PM
Carolyn inspired me and was always so encouraging to me especially with my limerick poems ,Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Evans Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:46 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. Yes, she was an inspiration to many. Hugs, Marilene
Daniel Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 10:52 PM
She did have wonderful words to say to everyone, her comments were truly encouraging:) great tribute, Marilene:)
Evans Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 11:31 PM
Thank you Jo. Have a good night or good day. I think you are twelve hours ahead of me.
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