Carnal

her body lines,
the smooth curves, 
turments my words,
hunts my dreams, 
disturbs my blood,
and puts my body on fire,
makes me the slave
of my own desire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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February 2, 2023 at 4:56 PM
Very expressive work, Gitlan: Keep writing, SuZ
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