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Caressing Breeze

A kiss of the breeze upon her face With gentle sounds of cooling grace The birdbath gurgles 'neath the trees Upon her face a kiss of the breeze Birds then sing from their lofty perch Hidden in the leaves of a birch From on high a chorus springs From their lofty perch birds then sing Sun casts its light on the Earth Singing ensues with sounds of mirth The morning melody is just right Upon the Earth sun casts its light 6-23-2024

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Date: 7/16/2024 11:39:00 AM
' the breeze upon her face, with gentle sounds of cooling grace. ' Such a beautiful image. So delicate and romantic, all at the same time. Your thoughts are dreamy. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/27/2024 12:05:00 PM
Excellent poem Joseph I love it hugs Shadow
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Date: 6/27/2024 5:29:00 AM
Wow! I love this poem. This is excellent Joseph. A Fave for me :)
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Date: 6/25/2024 5:20:00 AM
This is a nice one:)
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Date: 6/24/2024 8:32:00 AM
This is a breezy gem, Joseph. Question for you in soupmail
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Date: 6/24/2024 5:52:00 AM
I always admire your poetry and thank you for always responding, unlike some ungrateful writers. But that is like, comes and goes.
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Date: 6/23/2024 9:41:00 PM
I can imagine the serenity of this place that you describe. I like it's rhythmic style.
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Date: 6/23/2024 6:28:00 PM
very uplifting and graceful, Joseph...your poem sings!
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Date: 6/23/2024 6:20:00 PM
Lovely
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