Caressing Breeze

 A kiss of the breeze upon her face
 With gentle sounds of cooling grace
 The birdbath gurgles 'neath the trees
 Upon her face a kiss of the breeze

 Birds then sing from their lofty perch
 Hidden in the leaves of a birch
 From on high a chorus springs
 From their lofty perch birds then sing

 Sun casts its light on the Earth
 Singing ensues with sounds of mirth
 The morning melody is just right
 Upon the Earth sun casts  its light

 6-23-2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 7/16/2024 11:39:00 AM
' the breeze upon her face, with gentle sounds of cooling grace. ' Such a beautiful image. So delicate and romantic, all at the same time. Your thoughts are dreamy. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/27/2024 12:05:00 PM
Excellent poem Joseph I love it hugs Shadow
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Date: 6/27/2024 5:29:00 AM
Wow! I love this poem. This is excellent Joseph. A Fave for me :)
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Date: 6/25/2024 5:20:00 AM
This is a nice one:)
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Date: 6/24/2024 8:32:00 AM
This is a breezy gem, Joseph. Question for you in soupmail
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Date: 6/24/2024 5:52:00 AM
I always admire your poetry and thank you for always responding, unlike some ungrateful writers. But that is like, comes and goes.
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Date: 6/23/2024 9:41:00 PM
I can imagine the serenity of this place that you describe. I like it's rhythmic style.
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Date: 6/23/2024 6:28:00 PM
very uplifting and graceful, Joseph...your poem sings!
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Date: 6/23/2024 6:20:00 PM
Lovely
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