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Careless Love

This day the morning has not spoken Cradled in earthly arms life remains still, The great peace the east promised broken After the raging fire an ice age chill, The sky a blanket of radiation Beyond logic a universal kill. God looks down upon his creation, History briefs many warnings of war While a search in vain for mediation, No one left to pray pass on cultural lore This the perfect place for evolution Yet there were idiots that knew the score. God moves on this world without solution Rampant intelligence a gift no more Only species with no agenda no pollution Will inherit the new era and spore. © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/3/2022 2:16:00 AM

Your poem is brilliant and very moving Harry. Deserving of your wonderful win. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/2/2022 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Careless Love" is a wonderful write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a fun/great/blessed day writing away.................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/2/2022 9:30:00 AM

Harry, your poem raises questions that we must answer or experience the consequences of our actions. Congratulations on your win! Dynamic terza rima!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/2/2022 9:11:00 AM

Harry, congratulations! Such an interesting, thought-provoking poem that took me somewhat aback. I was glad to see your name in placements for my terza rima contest.

Harry Horsman
Date: 8/2/2022 5:56:00 PM

I'm honoured Milt, to be placed and with such amazing poets. Thank You.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/30/2022 12:24:00 PM

Hi Harry, firstly, I wish you good luck in the Terza Rima contest with this excellent write. It reads like a winner to me, Harry. I love the depth of this piece, when will we understand what we are doing TO OUR WORLD? Will we understand too late? Many are the questions my friend, so few answers. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend ..... Mike. A fave.

James Peranteau

Date: 7/17/2022 3:27:00 AM

well there dear poet, i found that , and i could be reading into mine own private indulgence with one uv mine own remembers; after reading several poignant scripts for your fans to collectively find inspiration this morning, well, i found just that, interestingly sp...ty.....much love, james

Bill Baker

Date: 7/16/2022 4:20:00 PM

Timely topic for the contest, Harry. Good luck. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/10/2022 11:00:00 PM

scary and true xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2022 12:58:00 PM

wow, that is a powerful one, Harry. I bet it's a great contender for the contest.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/10/2022 4:05:00 AM

You write quite honestly, my dear Harry, and the truth is very clear in your words. While it may be too late to save Earth, we nonetheless owe it to her to treat her with the reverence she deserves. The situation is becoming increasingly challenging. Many have allowed greed to cloud their judgment, while others have allowed themselves to be hypnotized by the thoughtless. Best wishes

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2022 2:15:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I appreciate the visit to my page. I wonder will what man is doing cause irreversible damage to our earth? Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/10/2022 12:11:00 AM

It is unfathomable that so many cannot see what is right in front of them. Greed rules their minds while others are brainwashed by the senseless. Our earth deserves the respect she needs before it is too late. Your poem expresses well the dire straights we are in Harry. Wonderfully written. Blessings xxoo

Michael Tor

Date: 7/8/2022 8:59:00 PM

Harry your words ring abundant Truth my friend. We have selfishly taken for granted this great earth we call home. Im sure the Lord is thinking about coming back soon. It is getting extreemly bad. Hope you are well my friend and your spirit is good. I am aware of all the nonsense that the Government is pushing on the great Australian people. God bless you Harry and thank you for sharing this winning piece of literature...

Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/8/2022 10:33:00 AM

An invaluable lesson for today. Robert

Valsa George

Date: 7/7/2022 10:12:00 PM

We have no thought for the safety of the world we live in nor any concern for the posterity. We keep on polluting the home we live in with war and fire. We have to brace for the impact ! A profound and meaningful poem harry ! All the best!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/7/2022 9:15:00 PM

Harry, just this Eve, I said to Jim,”Do you suppose that when the Bible says Jesus on the cross wept, it wasn’t like people say, that he thought the Father abandoned him, but because, being omnipotent, he was realizing that his death would not cause humanity to get its act together. Bravo for this poem. Xox

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/7/2022 8:14:00 PM

Right now, as "God looks down upon his creation". My heart breaks knowing that He is not happy. Your thoughts are tender and emotional, all at the same time. I am praying for our world, and those in it. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/7/2022 7:02:00 PM

Your engrossing, well written contest entry is an impressive contender, Harry. Have a nice weekend. :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/7/2022 5:24:00 PM

Wise words tend to fall upon deaf ears. God moves on this world without solution...When the Lord starts to move, mankind either stay where they are or move away from what the Lord is doing. Many wins Harry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2022 10:07:00 AM

- ... the world we live in (2022) ... excellently written, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/7/2022 10:04:00 AM

Amazing, meaningful write, Harry. So well done --a winning poem!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/7/2022 8:36:00 AM

very well argued.