Cardinal Roses

leading to our room. . .
fragrant petals you had strewn 
        cardinal roses 
whose hue was that of the sky
when passion first bloomed for us.

Feb. 18, 2022
for 'A BRIAN STRAND TANKA' Poetry Contest
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Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:11 PM
Romantic bliss in this one.
Peck Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Beautiful Tanka, Andrea.
Theraven Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Andrea, Floral colors so warm in a beautifully written Tanka. -Richard
Callus Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 12:46 AM
An artfully depicted special moment in time, Andrea. Congratulations on your deserved win. ~ Regards // paul
Brul Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 2:08 PM
Back with congratulations! A well-deserved win!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. A beautiful romantic, passionate Tanka!
Brul Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:00 AM
What a magical tanka! So passionately written! A fav for me.
Anaya Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Beautiful as always Andrea, good luck! Love will bring these feelings, so true
DiMino Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:43 AM
Lovely imagery! All our senses more powerful when motivated by loving relationship. Beautiful write!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:31 AM
Gorgeous imagery filled with the passion that only love can bring. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
Pandit Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 6:09 AM
How delightful and romantic a poem, Andrea.
Cunningham Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 2:46 AM
A very romantic gesture Andrea. Tom
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 9:39 PM
This is so sweet. Very romantic <3
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