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Car Trouble

A giant tree came crashing down And crushed a local car. The owner may not know it – He has not shown up so far. His car was safely parked (he thought); The spot, when he did pick it, Is legal up ‘til Tuesday when He’ll likely get a ticket. I wonder what the cops will do With summons time impending. Place ticket on the windshield (smashed) As if they are pretending… That nothing’s wrong? If that occurs That driver needs some pity – A fallen tree, a bashed up car And money owed the city!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/21/2018 9:20:00 AM
It's getting kinda cloudy, the air is getting thick. His language kinda bawdy, so blue, he's getting sick.
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Date: 11/19/2018 7:21:00 PM
Oh, how they'd ticket this poor fellow/gal if he/she were in Chicago!!! Maybe New York cops are a bit kinder. Hope so! Nice write, Ilene
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Date: 11/19/2018 12:02:00 PM
Did you look to see if the driver is still in his car? He/she may have been pounded down to the floorboards whilst reciting, "I think that I shall never see ….." .One never knows what God - or the Devil - will do next to attract attention, but we can rest assured you will put it into words everyone can understand! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/18/2018 8:04:00 PM
OUCH the poor driver going to get hit with having to pay up whatever he does, I guess the fact no one is hurt is the best thing in this sad story:-) hugs Jan xx
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