Car Crash

A dark room with a small wooden desk, no lamp
A thick pad of paper and a typewriter, never used
Like a museum exhibit, though they aren’t allowed to gather dust
And dead flies and moths, a pack of playing cards
I never learnt to play, but still they’ve turned yellow with age
The shelves full of books, thumbed and read a million times
The pages fall out sometimes onto the slanted shelf, broken
The cascade of over-used books falling into each other
A literary car crash 

The carpet burnt by years of clumsiness, dark and worn
The ceiling stained by years of nicotine, the cigarette smoker
Looking on at a world frozen, the books are the only living things
Read a million times and thumbed to death, the dirty pages blending into each other
The faces and the timeless, frozen authors and poets, trapped here forever
In the corner, a lonely television set, never used and not even plugged in
The lonesome keyboard, beaten a million times, my voice recorded
The German tongue, screamed above piano murder, the manslaughter of my violin
A cultural car crash

The curtains, white to ivory to ashen, unopened in an age
Time to let the world come in through the never-before-seen window
I sit upon the bed and watch the silhouettes gather, their vagabond army 
Creeping over everything with their tired and dirty little hands
The books I’ve read to death, the literary suicide, gathering in a spot of light
Like flocking birds fleeing for the winter, their matted feathers and scabbed legs
They can’t fly anywhere, trapped here, my favourite victims, dead within the covers,
Like broken pigeons trapped within damning cages. I close the door and leave
The untouched car crash

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/29/2009 10:59:00 AM
I like how you're playing with the sttructure of it and being a little inventive. There's also something smoldering in the speed and tone. Like an artwork gestating...between caterpillar and butterfly.
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Date: 3/5/2009 11:37:00 AM
Amazing imagery. Absolutly amazing. The words you write, allow me to see right through your eyes. I felt as if i could see it all. Keep it up please, good job. love, Jese
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Date: 2/26/2009 2:33:00 PM
Nathaniel, "cascade of over-used books" is a beautiful phrase. You have a very original style. And I thought I was going to read about an ordinary car crash. Yours is so magnificent! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2009 6:40:00 PM
masterful piece of art. very well done. a possible winne. the ideals so truthful and true some parts so familure to me but clearly you. i shall learn from it. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 2/25/2009 2:42:00 PM
Oh my goodness this is wondeful and horrid at the same time. Makes me want to fly to where you are an grab you by the scruff of the neck and hurl you into life. WOW "Creeping over everything with their tired and dirty little hands The books I’ve read to death, the literary suicide, gathering in a spot of light Like flocking birds fleeing for the winter, their matted feathers and scabbed legs They can’t fly anywhere, trapped here, my favourite victims, dead within the covers" wonderfull!
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:51:00 AM
beautifully captured... i love the last stanza... very powerful!! i actually thought you being a guy.. it was going to be about a deadly car crash... wow you sure tricked me!! thank you for your wonderful comment... both of us are surely on the same page about each other’s haiku... you keep on writing... and don't be afraid to learn new forms!! have a great day! ~ Arany
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