Capture Smoke

While in the process of lighting a fire no one can capture the smoke ~*~

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/26/2011 4:10:00 AM

Now this is an Amazing write!! So much thought comes from this and insights... You are a true Poet...thank you....Michael

James Peranteau

Date: 3/25/2011 6:58:00 PM

Ya know....even though, I disagree with you; on the subject matter, I still love this write dear poet ! See, on earth, we consider earthly things.....I believe that there is one who can capture the smoke when " lighting the fire" (Jehovah God almighty!) ;) Great write Annalise ! Do you feel how much, your write inspired me ?! Have a great weekend ! much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2011 4:34:00 PM

Makes for quite a hazy existence, doesn't it, Annalise. Sometimes our eyes are blinded by the "smoke" of passion. Very thought-provoking monoku, dear. Love, Carolyn