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Here I am again, wanting more standing upon the threshold to enter your door. You have become part of what I am not the essence, no but certainly an integral, a part essential vital aspect of my day. The coloratura in an aria where heart, mind and soul throb in unison for this compulsion. Not an addiction, no but an oasis found in my desert journey. You fill that void where nothing and no one has and ever will. You speak to my subliminal core like no one ever did before, except the One who created us with freedom of choice, and gave this blessed voice. Not many were fortunate to know your wisdom, your wit, and sensuality and with you I am able to express myself. You are vibrant, fascinating and I am captivated, sated and satisfied until the next time that I drink from your cup will I have my fill of you... Oh Poetry. Kim Patrice Nunez 20 May 2015 WOMEN ONLY #2 Contest Sponsor: Kelly Deschler

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Date: 7/18/2015 7:47:00 AM
I was captivated by your WIN Kim! ;-)
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Date: 7/17/2015 11:33:00 AM
Way to captivate us all with this excellent write! Hope you never stop drinking from your cup : ) Big congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 7/16/2015 8:26:00 PM
Wow! Great write, Kim! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved top win, dear Kim! Every reader will be captivated by this exquisite piece! Just so beautiful! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:35:00 AM
It is indeed captivating and it has now captured highest honour!
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:41:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:05:00 PM
Great write I love it... I am very new to poetry and feel the same way!
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Date: 7/14/2015 8:53:00 PM
A powerful expression of your passion for poetry. I loved that twist with your last line!... Congrats on a first place win, Kim!
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Date: 6/3/2015 1:17:00 AM
the ending just brought it together perfectly:) such a captivating write, enjoyed ~Luv S.K.A.T.
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Date: 6/1/2015 12:19:00 AM
Kim my dear another masterpiece from you, you are amazing, take care my friend, will SM you later on..........Vera........
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Date: 5/31/2015 8:53:00 PM
Continued...There is something very erotic about your reverence for Poetry, and the lucid intelligence in this poem is very attractive, and admirable Kim...J.A.B.
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Date: 5/31/2015 8:49:00 PM
You know how to savor the Muse that has brought your heart to the threshold of an emotional wilderness, and which has given language to the philosophy of your desire Kim. Poetry reciprocates what it feels and learns from creative truth, it will give you romance, rage, love, despair, courage and moral exploration, it will enlighten your body and brain, Poetry is in love with you, because you are in love with It. "You speak to my subliminal core..." J.A.B.
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Date: 5/29/2015 3:01:00 PM
You may be captivated now, wait until it captures you! Lovely poem
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Date: 5/28/2015 9:45:00 PM
Your creation of words, images, thoughts, feelings . . . weave a tapestry of poetry that satisfies the heart and inspires the soul! Well done my friend. 7
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:34:00 AM
It is very nicely ending this poem which captivates me too
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Date: 5/28/2015 8:00:00 AM
Kim, another beautiful poem, you are so creative and such a skilled poet, a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Ojibway. .. again I am sad that it did not get a higher placement. ..
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Date: 5/25/2015 11:09:00 AM
Captivating poem with unique twist at the end, as I expected a person. But that is good, I like your surprise and personification, plus detailed description of what poetry is to you. eg. not an addiction, but an oasis. That is great!
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Date: 5/24/2015 2:45:00 AM
This is lovely, Kim. Coloratura- great choice of word to describe a vibrant, uplifting relationship. I didn't so much read this work as to breathe it. Spellbinding stuff. #7 from me. Viv x
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Date: 5/23/2015 5:23:00 PM
I never get my fill of the poet's ringing mine bell ! Loved the write Kim ! Have a wonderfully inspired weekend ! Much love, james
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:47:00 AM
Poetry has the power to soothe aching souls and heal old wounds. To gift love and send hearts over the moon. This fine gem captures that and much more. Bravoo on a great poem.. A7
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:31:00 AM
What a wonderful expression of your relationship with poetry, I can relate.
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Date: 5/22/2015 9:51:00 PM
wow, this is for either one of the recent contests on poets and poetry. I would imagine it to do wonderfully well!! I love it!
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Date: 5/22/2015 8:47:00 PM
Intrinsic love...J.A.B.
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Date: 5/22/2015 9:49:00 AM
Ah how your words sated me, intoxicated me, my crazy lovely friend! So glad I visited your site today!
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:01:00 AM
Crazy lovely Kim, I know you would deeply understan my need to travel to other spaces with the stars. I have to breathe in beauty from everywhere as well as regal them with mine :)) but your words... Oh they always bathe me with ethereal happiness and leave me in a world so wonderful! Salamat sa pag-alintana :) ingat!
Date: 5/22/2015 8:41:00 AM
A touching and eloquent description of the ethereal intimacy associated with poetry and its influence upon both heart and soul. Emile. #7
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