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Without realization, eyes flutter in surprise, perhaps a simple reaction of anticipation - - of it all Do I believe in the unbelievable, like petals after the fall ? “I don’t, I do.” I question it all ------------ Stated clearly, within curves of curiosity, of simply me ------- Without hesitation, but with realization, I whisper you . . In this destination, is it possible to be, Captivated? ___________________ Simple thoughts from the heart Just a little scribble

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Date: 7/9/2020 8:26:00 PM
Simple thoughts that bring immense pleasure to readers. Captivating piece....Thank you for your warm comment on my POD. Keep pouring your creative muse!
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Date: 7/9/2020 10:11:00 PM
Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you JCB. I appreciate your kind words. You are very welcome. You are such a talented writer. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 1/22/2020 8:20:00 PM
Curiosity of the unknown... That spectral spark... Unchained speculation... leading off into the night... Captivating mystery in search... Of an answer... ("And do you feel scared, I do, but I won't stop and falter. Cause if I threw it all away, it can only get better." Do you feel scared by Howard Jones.)
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Date: 1/22/2020 8:59:00 PM
The unknown leaves you wondering, curious about so many things. Sometimes, those things that we don't know- should stay hidden. Some mystery is good. Thank you Robert. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 4/3/2019 3:39:00 PM
You can say that again...Captivated...I am am not...Curves of curiosity...
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Date: 4/3/2019 10:18:00 PM
Captivated. I am saying it again. :) Thank you Arturo. You are both curious and captivated. I do believe. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 12/27/2018 2:54:00 AM
Beautiful...I love your style, Brandy....I should say I'm captivated by its freshness and transmission of thought. ~ You still holding that daisy!? Regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Your thoughts humble me. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. Awe, and I am still holding that daisy. :) Many wonderful blessings to you. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 12/21/2018 8:46:00 PM
You are a romantic - and a good one at that. Very nice.
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Date: 12/21/2018 10:06:00 PM
:) Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you Gerald. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 12/18/2018 2:27:00 AM
What a beautiful and clever beats of the heart! Worthy of rereads! I can relate to those innocent whispers to the flowers.. each petal falls with its "I don't, I do"! Wonderfully rendered Brandy! Enjoyed reading.. Warmest wishes. Stay blessed always.
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:10:00 AM
Dear Besma, your comment touches my heart. I am sure many can relate to these moments, these emotions. I appreciate you and your thoughts, your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you and yours. ~ Brandy
Date: 12/17/2018 10:24:00 PM
A captivating scribble, Brandy, the impossible is always possible in our dreams and fantasies meeting somewhere beyond the clouds. All the best my friend. John
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Date: 12/17/2018 11:32:00 PM
Indeed!! Because anything can happen in a dream, or a fantasy. :) Thank you John for your kind words and wishes. ~ Brandy
Date: 12/17/2018 6:18:00 PM
I too believe in the unbelievable; it is the only way to get there.
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Date: 12/17/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Caren. If something is possible, I certainly believe- yet believing in the impossible- truly holds me captivated, until it happens. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 12/17/2018 2:28:00 PM
Good afternoon. Once again your scribbles bring forth beauty! I have some catching up to do...TAH
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Date: 12/17/2018 3:09:00 PM
Good afternoon Tobey. Thank you for being so kind, for reading these little scribbles of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 12/17/2018 1:13:00 PM
call it serendipity, nicole... well done!..huggs
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Date: 12/17/2018 3:08:00 PM
:) Yes, and I love that word. Thank you nette. I appreciate you. I am smiling because you called me by my middle name. Which is Nicole. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 12/17/2018 12:56:00 PM
Unbelievable does happen sometimes..and if it is the destination, why hesitate? Delicately rendered thoughts..well written whispers Brandy.
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Date: 12/17/2018 3:06:00 PM
Exactly!! It is wonderful, because sometimes- the impossible becomes possible. It does happen. I am one saying yes, after petals linger from the flower. :) Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 12/17/2018 12:01:00 PM
Very nice Brandy :)
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Date: 12/17/2018 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. You are so kind and thoughtful. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 12/17/2018 11:51:00 AM
Beautifully expressed Brandy. This is so soft and romantic and will find it's way into even the coldest heart.
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Date: 12/17/2018 2:49:00 PM
Once captivated, all possibilities are open for discovery. Your thoughts are appreciated. Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Chris. My best to you. :) Brandy

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