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T M P U Tenderly she holds him close Makes him comfortable in bed Perfect is her love for her child Understanding its borrowed time written 08/07/2013 contest Captcha Acrostic

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Date: 8/9/2013 5:23:00 AM
Lovely work my friend.I like it.
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Date: 8/9/2013 4:27:00 PM
Ty dear friend happy that you do Love Shadow xox smiles
Date: 8/8/2013 8:59:00 AM
Shadow - wise and sweet. kathy
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:45:00 AM
Kathy ty you so much for your support most encouraging Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/8/2013 6:26:00 AM
A winner for sure... so sweet! Thanks for sharing my dear Shadow! Hugs and much love, Jack xoxox
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:18:00 AM
Ty Jack appreciated greatly hugs back and are you going to be my Santa this year lol? Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/8/2013 12:33:00 AM
Shadow, a good one... good luck in the contest...LINDA
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:20:00 AM
ty Linda gl yourself Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 5:27:00 PM
love this thoughtful write
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/7/2013 5:45:00 PM
hi Jack Ty for stopping in to read Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 4:28:00 PM
Grasping the essence of borrowed time is not easy to do. We sit and write our pretty rhyme till that day when we're through. A mothers love, they say's eternal. Like evolutions mist. But the heart will ache when the boy's Mom's gone. But his soul would not have missed. :)
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:47:00 PM
ty Robert I appreciate greatly your time spent reading my works shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 3:29:00 PM
This is heart touching and wonderful...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/7/2013 4:48:00 PM
Donna so kind of you glad you enjoyed it shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 3:16:00 PM
Ahh!! This reminds me of a story close to home recently..A two year old just died from cancer..It was so sad..REads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this very emotive work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:49:00 PM
very heartbreaking so sorry to hear. Sara ty for reading I very much enjoyed visiting yours shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 2:41:00 PM
this is a very sweet one, dear!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/7/2013 4:50:00 PM
Andrea you are so sweet yourself Ty shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 11:03:00 AM
poignant is the word, shadow... the last line really hit me... marvelous craftsman you are!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:52:00 PM
hi Nette all time with people is only borrowed indeed all life. You have a tender heart shadow x smiles

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