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With no one to steer the course, A ship is like an unbridled horse. Any system will rot to naught, Without a leader at the helm to direct Has any paper boat from its source, Charted its own safe course! April.29.2023 Bite Size Contest. No.62. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Date: 4/30/2023 3:33:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Valsa. Your mental imagery and thoughts are both very relevant and beautifully stated. Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:32:00 PM
Lovely poem for Line's contest Valsa Good Luck.
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Date: 4/30/2023 6:23:00 AM
Hi Valsa, a short but poignant poem - yes we need a captain, yes we need leaders, but there are just a few in this world, so when we find him or her, with all our might, lets follow whats right, and be rid of our plight, we have to fight, not turn off the news on TV with fright! you make an excellent point in this great write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:24:00 AM
Wow, Valsa. Great bite-size poem.
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Date: 4/29/2023 5:57:00 AM
A powerful message you convey, Valsa. Best to you.
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