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snow-topped zeniths rise iced water softly shuffles… sky a grumpy shade
1ST Place Contest Winner Written: March 3rd, 2022 H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/11/2022 4:26:00 PM
this is really great writing. Love it, Sotto. And congrats.
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Date: 3/8/2022 8:20:00 AM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your beautiful poem and I love your image also ~Constance
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Date: 3/6/2022 5:46:00 AM
Love “sky a grumpy shade”
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Date: 3/6/2022 2:00:00 AM
How did I miss seeing this ! This is such a lovely haiku ! I am not at all surprised that this has bagged No 1 trophy in the contest ! Hearty Congratulations dear friend !
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Date: 3/5/2022 5:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. A superb Haiku with vivid imagery! :)Paulette
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Date: 3/5/2022 12:22:00 PM
Good imagery with an added alliteration, I like your entry, Lasaad. A poet friend, Bill
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Date: 3/4/2022 2:12:00 AM
A stunning image Lasaad, hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 3/3/2022 2:48:00 PM
I live in the northwest, so can relate to both 'snow topped zeniths' and 'grumpy skies' - very descriptive! Best wishes for the contest~
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