Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Capped Mountains

snow-topped zeniths rise
iced water softly shuffles…
sky a grumpy shade

1ST Place Contest Winner

Written: March 3rd, 2022

H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2022 at 4:26 PM this is really great writing. Love it, Sotto. And congrats.

Constance La France March 8, 2022 at 8:20 AM Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your beautiful poem and I love your image also ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2022 at 5:46 AM Love “sky a grumpy shade”

Valsa George March 6, 2022 at 2:00 AM How did I miss seeing this ! This is such a lovely haiku ! I am not at all surprised that this has bagged No 1 trophy in the contest ! Hearty Congratulations dear friend !

Paulette Calasibetta March 5, 2022 at 5:21 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest. A superb Haiku with vivid imagery! :)Paulette

Bill Baker March 5, 2022 at 12:22 PM Good imagery with an added alliteration, I like your entry, Lasaad. A poet friend, Bill

Tom Cunningham March 4, 2022 at 2:12 AM A stunning image Lasaad, hope you're keeping well. Tom

Michelle Faulkner March 3, 2022 at 2:48 PM I live in the northwest, so can relate to both 'snow topped zeniths' and 'grumpy skies' - very descriptive! Best wishes for the contest~