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Canvas Not One Sees

Sun holds violet dream Under the rim— stars hung high Blink at a new moon.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2024 10:59:00 AM

just love how you do these shorter poems. So cute.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/21/2024 7:40:00 AM

Dear Paige, your heavenly haiku captures the luster and magic of the celestial bodies that we wish upon, dream upon, create myths upon and cast our imagination upon to create a poetic gem such as this. The stars are in awe and so am I. Splendid imagery! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/31/2023 6:56:00 AM

Transferring stars to canvas, I like it. We are required to provide the blinking.It’s not easy writing short forms. You seem to have a knack for it.

Marikate Kingston

Date: 6/13/2023 3:52:00 PM

Nature gives us so many reasons to write doesn't it? Moonlight is 1 of my favorite things. I want to "blink" at the moon tonight after reading your poem. Over a lake the moon creates a path that I can follow, not now but tomorrow. Your poem makes me think of a line I remember from somewhere, "Two things can tear my heart in two, moonlight on still ponds and you" I enjoyed the images your poem brought me, can you tell? So pleased to read this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/15/2023 1:27:00 PM

Very nice. I can see the stars blinking :)