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Can'T You See

Can't you see.. the pain in my eyes Can't you see.. what's building up inside Can't you see.. how much you've hurt me Man can't you see what you are doing to me all your lies & bull**** is driving me crazy calling me your wifey & baby but you still messing with other ladys Can't you see.. our love is dying Can't you see.. that time is flying Can't you see.. that my heart is crying

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John Loving Iii

Date: 4/3/2009 3:33:00 PM

kick him to the curb. john

Nita Martin

Date: 11/3/2008 7:33:00 PM

Girl I know how you feel been there lots of times your all that when he needs ya to feed him or get his beer but when he's out he's all bout him and what ever hoockie he can pick up you know players shouldn't get married but they do it up to you to say hit the road listen to that song unreplaceable you know there are nice guys out there cut him lose and find one just remember telling him to stop don't work and if he cheats once he will do it again

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/2/2008 8:41:00 PM

get rid of him if he makes you feel like that.great way to express yourself.dont stop there keep it coming.WRITE ON

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/1/2008 1:48:00 PM

Andrea - your pain just pours out through the words in this poem - I'm sorry for your pain - God Bless