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Can'T Live Without

How I desire you To hold you in hands Gaze on your beauty Freshness of your scent What's that extra touch Some say my love Is way too shallow I say that it's deep Attached I cling Chocolate Addiction Deep, deep, deep Can't live Without You For contest: "I Just Can't Live Without You" Sponsored by: Drake Eszes

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/7/2011 5:32:00 PM

Sara, this is absolutely fabulous! Excellent write:) Thanks for your comment on "Cool"...unruffled at the time of writing although admit this is not always the case...today it's semi-ruffled, why, don't know;)) some days are like this!

Afolabi Taiwo

Date: 3/7/2011 2:27:00 PM

They say diamond is a lady best friend, your love for chocolate is different in that you only gazed and admired the beauty the scent and the delicate touch, be that as it may the passion in taking a bite, the feel on the tongue, the delay in chewing and melting that percolate into your warm sub-conscious mouth and licking your lips with your tongue could have added more bite. A good one no doubt.

James Fraser

Date: 3/7/2011 7:43:00 AM

You've caught the readers out with this one Sara, well done....:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/6/2011 12:00:00 PM

I love the ending Sara, thought you were referring to a person ;) Hope you are enjoying your weekend and good luck for the contest :) blessings wilma

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 3/6/2011 6:42:00 AM

I love this one Sara as so many others... My chocolate addiction is only second to shoes...lol Lay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2011 10:31:00 PM

WEll, now, this is one entry that really speaks to my heart (and my tummy) heehee. Good luck in contest. LUv ,Andrea

Ellen Fahey

Date: 3/5/2011 6:25:00 PM

We have two things in common, you and me... our love for chocolate and poetry! Ellen :D

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/5/2011 10:47:00 AM

Love the suprise ending. Very nice description of your love for chocolate. Once I found out what it was about I had to read it again. I like when a poem takes you somewhere you weren't expeccting.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2011 9:54:00 AM

LOL I thought about writing about chocolate too, Sara. Guess we're both chocoholics. Best wishes in Drake's contest with this fine entry. (NICE use of the form!) Love, Carolyn

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/5/2011 7:35:00 AM

real nice......

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/5/2011 7:12:00 AM

I love your passion in this one!!! Excellent entry my dear sweet Sara....luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2011 6:21:00 AM

Sweet and lovely Sara.. a romantic and regal write full of expressive emotions..good luck int he contest my friend with luv..