Can't Imagine

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I can’t imagine my life Without you The silence Through the night Sometimes In an effort To push back The emptiness To freeze time I refuse to sleep Just stay awake And hold you in my arms Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~CAN'T IMAGINE~ 2020 AP: 3rd place 2022 Posted on March 1, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/2/2019 4:25:00 AM

Line, I remember staying awake for hours watching each of my newborns, making sure they were breathing, marveling that I had ever survived life before they had arrived. This poem reminded me of these days immediately! Thank you for writing this one. It brought me such joy!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/2/2019 10:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, Caren. What a lovely compliment.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/1/2019 5:57:00 PM

I got a lump in my throat reading this.. that's the point of a good poem, right! BG

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 6:43:00 PM

Thank you so much for your most appreciated compliment, Barbara.