Candy Caper

My halloween candy went missing one day The usual suspects came into play The clues were quite easy to unveil The culprit had left a candy wrapper trail! The trail ended at little brother's door He had pulled off this caper the year before I called his name, he came running out I said "Boo" and he let out a shout It was the same for a few years He'd take my treats then get a good scare! --- 10-17-19 If I Were Your Brother Contest Sponsor: Bobby May

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:34:00 AM

Brotherly love here (lol) Congrats on your placement Joseph. ~Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2019 5:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your cute winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement and you could be my brother Mr. May and if you tell mom you will be sorry,

Joseph May
Date: 10/30/2019 6:06:00 PM

Lol...Thank you for my placement brother Bobby

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/27/2019 12:01:00 PM

So cute! Bobby ought to like this one! G.L. in the contest, Joseph. Smiles, Gershon

Joseph May
Date: 10/30/2019 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Gershon

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/23/2019 8:13:00 PM

Ah, memories of Halloween come back as I read this. My brother would hide is candy in the closet, xo

Joseph May
Date: 10/30/2019 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Vie..

Paul Callus

Date: 10/22/2019 7:26:00 AM

Probably you enjoyed the Halloween exchange between you and your brother, and would have been disappointed had he decided to be a good boy :) Enjoy the memory! Regards // paul

Joseph May
Date: 10/22/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/21/2019 7:22:00 PM

Seems as though he would have learned his lesson by now!! I guess not. Little brothers. (Soft giggle) At least there is a good scare every year. With the BOO!! Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 10/22/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/19/2019 11:39:00 PM

Why are little brothers always so cute but terribly naughty - he gets away with a scare only but has all your candy, he probably thinks that the scare has far less impact than eating all that yummy candy. Well penned my friend, good luck in the contest hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May
Date: 10/22/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer