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Candlelight Kisses Minichu

Candle tongue stirs the skin within my skin, Glass red with so many tears — Romance personified by the melting of wick, Though shadows drone on walls, a phantasmic tango These French lips worth reading — Inside heart highs and lows Timing Glimpsing Stealing Candle tongue stirs the skin within my skin — These French lips worth reading, Stealing

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/17/2025 4:03:00 PM

Beautifully crafted and an incredible write, Paige.

Alesia Leach

Date: 5/11/2025 4:01:00 PM

Paige, this is so sensual and gorgeously atmospheric. “Candle tongue stirs the skin within my skin” is just exquisite--what an opening! The rhythm glides like slow dancing light. This one definitely lingers.

Marikate Kingston

Date: 4/24/2025 6:09:00 PM

Just dreamy. J'adore

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/23/2025 12:47:00 PM

Wonderful kisses Minichu, I do know that there is a Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD and what makes it a difficult constricted write. I really enjoyed, Paige super-sensual !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/22/2025 8:50:00 PM

Wow! The shadow appears again and with romantic candlelight, but this romance is not inviting…there is pain.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2025 2:47:00 AM

- Don't be burned by a kiss ... even if it's a romantic moment, Paige :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 4/21/2025 8:00:00 PM

Dear sweet paige Ah what a passionate moment youv captured here, and in such a creative manner using a form that is tricky! Your mind works in such poetic ways and leaves us all readers in awe of your word weaving! Sending you light always