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Candlelight Dinner

I planned a romantic dinner for us, that beautiful night, alone within our little world, she, me and our candlelight. I had an inner feeling, that day could change my life, she might be the one I was dreaming, as my future wife I was waiting for the day, its our date, hoping she might be my perfect mate. It's like a dreamland, love is in the air, we were together, as if we don't care. As we met my mind was completely blank for a while, all we could do is simply exchange our smile. We both had lot to say but unknown about the way to start, words were blocked with hidden feelings within our heart. Complete silence, she may be afraid, so was I trying to find words for me in her eye To comfort her from that shyness and to break that silence I made an effort to initiate conversation by complimenting cracking jokes and sometimes flirting But her words were limited, thought it didn't work at all I had to make her day a very special With a sip, bottle of chilled wine an idea struck on my mind On my mobile, I played a song then nothing could go wrong I asked her the pleasure to dance? she smiled, don't wanna miss that chance she looked at my eyes, I held her near, light polite with love and care. Expressing our feelings freely that we want to share, I was lost in her love and laughter in the air. I said "wanna end this friendship and start something new I can't deny my heart's feeling, I really do love you." I knelled down on the ground and offered the ring with her positive smile our love got wings Now, I don't need to live my life alone, I am there, in your soul I found my home,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/14/2015 3:08:00 PM
Nirzal, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/11/2015 9:06:00 AM
Narzal,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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