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Candlelight

Comfort me, my love… Chill my WARMTH and make me w h o l e again- I have traveled to Europe and back just to be locked in your embrace. May your gentle river flow towards me... and sweep me into a breath of FRESH mist. R e l e a s e my inhibitions and b r e a k my restrictions. Ease me, my love... Feed my DESIRE with your FIRE of locked flames- I need the heat of your love to resurrect my soul. May your g e n t l e river flow towards my heart... and cascade into blazing embers. For I was so lost in my insight- now I’m found in your candlelight. October 3, 2016

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Date: 12/2/2018 7:44:00 PM
Laura, this is a wonderful well written poem, congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 10/10/2016 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations Loo: Beautiful 'lost and found' finish. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/10/2016 5:56:00 PM
...what a wonderfully intimacy and ecstasy renewed. Brilliant final couplet.
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Date: 10/9/2016 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful, Laura. Congratulations on your podium win in this Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/9/2016 2:01:00 AM
Lovely poem and I agree with Jo, your ending couplet is just terrific. Congratulations, Laura.
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:39:00 AM
This is so sweet, Laura :) love that final couplet:)
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Date: 10/3/2016 7:30:00 AM
Beautiful - Luloo - beautiful Regards, Mark
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