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Canada But Not As We Know It

I’ve never given much thought, about the last train to Auschwitz for indeed every train, was intended to be ones last, Except for the guards, who sit atop the cattle cars As the human livestock, slowly asphyxiates behind bars not giving them a thought, or a care in the world except maybe, what great jobs we have Sit up here smoking, and joking, oblivious to the choking Just shoot anything that try’s get off, An absolute no brainer, For only those without brains, have no feelings or remorse This one and only requirement, fully endorsed Besides it keeps them away, from the Russian front they’ve heard all the stories, about that hell hole where they run over prisoners with tanks, No thanks Switch off out here, in the country air, as the wind rushes through, aryan sun bleached hair And the moans and groans continue, all very routine Stench rises and falls, in wafts and palls Quick Fritz look, Fräuleins in the fields wave and call Raising up rifles, greetings from SS railway division to all Cream of the crop, only room for special ones on top Full stop! Whistles shrill, RAUS! RAUS! SCHNELL! SCHNELL! Screams aloud, above the putrid smell as the chimneys belch ash, over an indifferent hell Bewildered cargo pours out Protestations, my baby, my mummy, my daddy, is dead The reply, a heavy truncheon blow, across the head Get into line, you dirty swine Selection process begins Whilst guards have a chat and a grin on the horizon a thunderous din Russians are closing in. Indeed this was the last train to Auschwitz and now it’s pulling out as the guards banter and shout Hey Fritz! where you going to spend, your bag of gold teeth Fritz says Bolivia, how about you? Franz laughs back, somewhere further, that doesn’t stink like your feet Meanwhile the zombies bedraggled clothes are already in transit to (CANADA) Not far from the crematoria Not that far away at all Last Train to Auschwitz Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 15/4/2021 (CANADA) = warehouse and sorting area in Auschwitz. German RAUS = out, SCHNELL = quick or fast

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Date: 4/18/2021 10:18:00 AM
I like the approach you took, showing the horrible apathy and not just apathy, their PLEASURE in what they were doing. They will get their justice in the next life.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 11:06:00 AM
Heya Andrea, I was trying to avoid the visceral approach, and see if I could get the message across in, as you said, an apathetic indifference to suffering, I’m sure your right these crimes will be answered for, in cosmic karma, or hell, cheers David
Date: 4/16/2021 3:31:00 PM
This is so well written a true contender for the contest, Sending you winning wishes , keep up the great writes, I am enjoying them David :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/17/2021 3:05:00 AM
Thank you Mystic Rose, I think their mockery and total indifference to suffering, speaks more of their sadistic nature than their actions, or at least equals it, cheers David
Date: 4/15/2021 1:48:00 PM
Yes David The train driver The guard's The shooters The gasses
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/15/2021 2:57:00 PM
No David indeed in fact as you pointed out. Sick and twisted as it may seem but to them the good times and party was finally over
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/15/2021 2:18:00 PM
One big sick joke to the SS Christopher, cattle, sheep and pigs, got better treatment even in them days, I wanted to approach this contest from a different angle, the enjoyment and pleasure the murderers got, showed they where not just following orders, no excuses, cheers David

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