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A complete re-hash of my earlier poem of the same name.

Lyrics by a human, namely, me, but...

Full disclosure...

The music is not human ;-)

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O my Lord, I hope you don’t see man as virus or disease This bright blue globe you gave us faces such profound unease We’re told that we will drown or burn though some of us will freeze And only you can save us… can we have our ball back please We drive our cars and fly in planes for holidays on skis And now they tell us that we’ve brought our planet to its knees We’re gonna catch the sun and stick up windmills in the breeze Which feels like ‘fingers-crossed’ so, can we have our ball back please We make it, break it, use it up We throw it in the trash And then we buy another one Cos all it costs is cash But now it seems our number’s up We’ve been a little rash This Earth unlike the phoenix May not rise up from the ash Another storm has ripped up houses, bridges, cars and trees The sewers overflowed into the rivers and the seas But now we’re in a heatwave and it’s thirty-five degrees It’s really rather hot so can we have our ball back please The scientists keep saying we eat too much meat and cheese They tell us we can all survive on lentils, beans and peas Which won’t achieve too much when just a few of us agrees And so I have to ask you, can we have our ball back please We make it, break it, use it up We throw it in the trash And then we buy another one Cos all it costs is cash But now it seems our number’s up We’ve been a little rash This Earth unlike the phoenix May not rise up from the ash This thing that’s wrong with planet Earth is killing bugs and bees And coral reefs have had their day in many far off seas Though governments may talk a lot, they never hear our pleas Their taxes will not save us… can we have our ball back please We leave our oil and gas right there beneath the sands and seas Then ship more in with diesel fumes and importation fees We’re gonna catch the sun and stick up windmills in the breeze Which feels like ‘fingers-crossed’ so, can we have our ball back please We make it, break it, use it up We throw it in the trash And then we buy another one Cos all it costs is cash… To save the world we’re armpit deep In net zero decrees But only you can save us… Can we have our ball back please

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Date: 8/3/2025 7:11:00 AM
Terry, you've accomplished a rhyming song of genius and its many factual messages. Applause and ovations to you for your skill. Sad that mankind cannot guide his own steps and has been ruining our planet. God forgives the repentant sinner, but there are only so many balls to give before the game is over.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/3/2025 7:51:00 AM
It's fantabulous and faved, Terry!
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Terry Flood
Date: 8/3/2025 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, Lin. When I previously posted this, it was a straight poem, with no chorus/refrain…. Many efforts to make a song out of it, were nice, singy songy things, but lacking something. So I added a chorus but the lines were pretty much the same length as the verses and didn’t quite cut it. When I split each line of the chorus over two lines… the whole thing came alive. Glad you enjoyed, Lin. Terry
Date: 8/2/2025 6:38:00 PM
This is fabulous, Terry. Song goes perfectly with the lyrics. Which generator are you using? Suno? Love it!
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Terry Flood
Date: 8/3/2025 2:37:00 AM
Thanks, Jeff. Took a lot of goes to get this right. I dabble with Suno but I tend to use AImusicgen.ai as I ‘feel’ more comfortable with it. Biggest bugbear is that both apps seem to ignore text prompts, so I have to set as many parameters as I can in the set up stage. To be fair, at the moment I’m working on a free subscription to see how I get on with it or if the novelty might wear off. But what drives me most batty, is having the poem go live, on Soup, before you can input your mp3 file. In this instance, 12 people had visited this poem before the mp3 was attached. Glad you enjoyed this, Jeff: See you on my next tour ;-)

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