Campfire Blues

the snarling embers become pale and lose their heat the north wind brings snow © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Joe Dimino

Date: 2/27/2018 5:29:00 AM

That North wind does win-out for awhile; but, good snarling embers, never stay from their flame-state too long, and life is a furnace again. Love this work, Harry; short while backed with great imagery and wisdom.

Chris Hagy

Date: 1/7/2018 8:49:00 PM

Fine haiku Harry :)...burrrr...time to go inside! :) Have a good one :)

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2018 10:19:00 AM

Great way to express it, very poetic Harry

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/4/2018 9:28:00 AM

Great imagery in this clever haiku Harry; good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2018 8:58:00 AM

I enjoyed this clever piece Harry. I can feel the chill.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2018 1:30:00 AM

Love the easy way you did embers and snowflakes, Harry. A VERY good KU you came up with!!

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/3/2018 7:02:00 PM

Very awesome haiku for the contest. I like it. Nicely done.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2018 4:30:00 PM

what a clever haiku for the contest:-) good luck Harry:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/3/2018 4:25:00 PM

Can't have campfire without embers..a well written Haiku harry..best for a win.