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Camp Ground Prick

Dull-witted camp ground prick Do you think I laughed at your poke I now black and blue from your black and yellow that was no joke You you wasp

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Katherine Stella

Date: 8/21/2010 6:37:00 PM

now isn't this a kicker or should say little stinger lol sry for your pain for i GOT ZAPPED TOO ouchy great write and even a better read also thanks for your kind comment on my poem for contest keep up the great writing me still smiling

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2010 6:41:00 AM

Started to laugh but then I felt your pain..Sorry that you got stung..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that...Sara

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/7/2010 11:05:00 AM

Since wasps started stinging, I learned how to run faster than their wings would move. Great job! Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/5/2010 6:09:00 AM

Very painful prick you got, James

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/4/2010 10:45:00 PM

OOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPSSSSSSS..... that wasp did it.....;)I'm sorry,but I can't stop smiling..poor finger... Cold ice will do just fine:)or Vinegar..,.:)haha

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 4:33:00 PM

Ouch! That's the worst kind of "prick," James. Ice helps relieve the pain and the swelling. Seems to work better than anything else. Sorry you were stung. Love, Carolyn

Alex Bruinekool

Date: 7/4/2010 4:03:00 PM

Very good. Certainly something we can all relate to. It is always frustrating to be stung.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/4/2010 3:57:00 PM

I got stung too, it was not nice and itchy!

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 3:55:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.