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Camelot

CAMELOT In nonesuch age was there a world so fair Wherein the rule of justice led the way All men could prosper with good work and care With sun and law and honor every day Twelve good men true gave all an equal share In nature’s bounty, and held careful sway An ideal place and evil there was not The myth impossible of Camelot . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck Entered in Nette Onclaud's Contest MOMENT IN ANOTHER TIME

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Moment In Another Time" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 3:33:00 AM
a real KC, syd... king of camelot rides high... lyrical piece so fair!.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:34:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney this is a beautiful poem xx
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:33:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your well deserved win!! It also "never rains 'till after sundown"...lol Well done ...big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:54:00 PM
Wonderful ottava rima for this contest. Gosh, I have to get really busy on mine!!! that last line was so true: myth impossible.
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Date: 3/20/2012 4:55:00 PM
Very clever, using the none such age as your favorite time. Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:07:00 PM
Wow...this is wonderful Sydney! I haven't even thought of where to go with this contest, but you've done a fantastic job!
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Date: 3/20/2012 12:13:00 PM
I thought about doing a Camelot piece. I'm so glad I didn't. Yours is terrific. Blessings, Rhonda
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