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Camelot

O Bactrian, my champion, the burdens you must bear. Unwanted eyes and forceful tries, to scale the heights up there. No dromedary would you be, were I to cut a lump from thee. Since forming in the amnion, your inner parts and ways, you’ll always be a Bactrian, beneath thy visage gazed. A camel formed from the divine, who also bears a sorrowed line, the image, marvelous, you bear, is worthy of all praise. So shed thy burdens and draw near; may halcyon be thy days.

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Date: 9/21/2022 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for the reply to my comment, sir. And I agree with your wisdom: we cannot be but who we are. / Maurice
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Date: 9/21/2022 8:00:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem, sir. Especially the lines: "No dromedary would you be, were I to cut a lump from thee." In case some of your readers don;t know, Domedary camls have two "lumps" (or humps), Bactrians have one. / Maurice
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Date: 9/20/2022 10:25:00 AM
Jeff your Poetry is superb in relating in this Shakesparean flavor. The theme is well thought of. I really appreciate your insightfulness on Camelot. I invision you on Jeopardy running the whole category on Shakesparean questions. For your love of his writings...
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Date: 9/20/2022 10:08:00 AM
Amazing lines with Shakesparean touch. Very well penned. I enjoyed very much reading it. Jeff, Thank you for sharing your poem.
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