Came Alot

Queen Guinevere was quite a sight
When Arthur returned from a fight
He looked up and down
Then said with a frown,
"You look like you've had a rough knight!"

Arthur opened the bedroom door
Where clothes lay all over the floor
"This looks rather bad,"
Said Sir Gal He Had,
"I've mistaken your wife for an whore."

There's more to the story than that
The Kingdom of Arthur fell flat
But Queen Guinevere
Did not shed one tear
For she loved to give tit for tat!

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Date: 8/26/2022 8:49:00 AM
Love your inappropriate humor. Your colloquialisms and limericks delight me to no end. Many thanks.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/26/2022 10:24:00 AM
Mahalo nui loa, Rebecca! Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!
Date: 7/30/2022 7:27:00 PM
Your Humor is clever. The story your poem tells is vivid, and funny. An excellent combination.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/31/2022 6:23:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha!
Date: 3/18/2022 12:23:00 PM
Got the best of yours and the first one is LOL! Tit-for-tat :))) M.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/18/2022 12:26:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa, Margarita! Aloha!
Date: 9/12/2021 7:56:00 AM
HaHa! You are so funny, Rico. A great story and beautiful rhyming! An A+ Excellent! Aloha.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/12/2021 11:11:00 AM
I am surprised you found this, but thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Date: 3/11/2021 4:41:00 PM
Aloha! Thank you for commenting on one of my poems, so I'm paying respects to one of yours; but not as much tot for tat as in this poem hahaha. When I read the title I wasn't sure what I was getting in to, but your word plays are great; a true laugh. Very enjoyable. Thank you. Aloha!
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Date: 3/3/2021 4:16:00 PM
a fav.,.you are very witting ..I love it
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/26/2022 10:25:00 AM
Mahalo, Nora! Aloha!
Date: 9/6/2020 8:54:00 AM
I love this Rico !! You are so good with rhymes and words and perfectly melded content ! Lots of laughter. Thank you !
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/6/2020 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting! I am quite impressed with the following you have acquired with only TWO poems on this site! Well done, indeed! Aloha! Rico
Date: 7/30/2018 9:48:00 PM
Hello Rico … a great play on words. Thanks for the chuckle Rico - Lindsay
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/31/2018 5:01:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Too depressing to continue writing Limericks about Trump! Aloha! Rico
Date: 7/30/2018 1:24:00 PM
I love it when I'm laughing before I open the poem, and you went exactly where I was hoping you would ;p gotta fave this one!!! Aloha Rico! :)) xomo
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/31/2018 5:00:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa, Maureen! Your encouragement is always appreciated! Aloha! Rico
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