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Calliope

A full moon is shining, tethered and swinging
I'm holding a ticket. Bells seem to be ringing
Somehow the landscape, whitewashed in winter
is distorting the thicket all buried by glitter

Crickets are chanting, as if it were summer 
tho' snowflakes are dancing, and fall to the ground
Softly, they're humming a song I remember
A scene so familiar, but reason confounds me

In a flurry of color, in a figment, unplanned
words that I know, like the back of my hand
are whispered by someone whose face I can't see...
slurred, but with candor, in faint reverie

She points and I see it,... not far in the distance
A merry-go-round with no one to ride
Calliope music is making me cry 
The same song is playing, so lovely and frail
A tune that I know, but my memory fails 

I climb on a horse, with a bright gilded mane
I am fooled by a mythical fairytale scheme
My horse springs alive from it's once wooden throne
And off we will ride to the shores of the moon

We ride into night, with a storybook notion
until dawn's cruel illusion swallows the dream...

     Where everything perfect, supreme and sublime,
     is hiding a secret that daylight denies ~



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Barden Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:12 PM
What an extraordinarily charming and whimsical write - love it! Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved win, Carrie - blessings as always, my friend! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Amazing, Carrie, nicely done verse & great imagery.. Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Wow - a most deserving top win for your magically awesome poem. Beautiful, Carrie.
Neumann Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on your win. I am dreaming, this is wonderfully penned, Kai
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Carrie, it was wonderful to read this once more and to see your amazing poem again with another top win! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 2:25 PM
I'm glad to be in such fine company, Sandra! Thank you!
Hlabisa Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Congrats... wat a lovely piece. All the best
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations Carrie... SKAT
Haight Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your top win for this magnificent dreamy and mystical poem! Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Carrie :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
Nunez Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations, Carrie!I can see why your piece is on the top win! Such seamless and detailed write. Hugs! Kim :) :)
Richards Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:18 PM
My goodness.....what a nice surprise, and honor, Rob. Thanks so much for inspiring this poem, ...strangely, it is similar to a dream that I've had. I think I know what it is all about.... (perhaps I need professional help lol !!) Thanks so much !!
Carmack Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Carrie: How I love your style. Congrats and thank you so much for entering.
Guzzi Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:39 PM
So mysterious Carrie I want to hear more. Light & Love
La France Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 11:37 AM
Carrie, your poem is dreamy and lovely,7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, my girl and me
Konos Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Oh my Lord Carrie.....Please let us know when your movie debuts 2016.....It will be starring Johnny Depp and Amanda Seyfried
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 7:29 PM
I like your picks for the cast !! I suppose there has to be evil forces somewhere....hmm, wonder who it will be!
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