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A full moon is shining, tethered and swinging I'm holding a ticket. Bells seem to be ringing Somehow the landscape, whitewashed in winter is distorting the thicket all buried by glitter Crickets are chanting, as if it were summer tho' snowflakes are dancing, and fall to the ground Softly, they're humming a song I remember A scene so familiar, but reason confounds me In a flurry of color, in a figment, unplanned words that I know, like the back of my hand are whispered by someone whose face I can't see... slurred, but with candor, in faint reverie She points and I see it,... not far in the distance A merry-go-round with no one to ride Calliope music is making me cry The same song is playing, so lovely and frail A tune that I know, but my memory fails I climb on a horse, with a bright gilded mane I am fooled by a mythical fairytale scheme My horse springs alive from it's once wooden throne And off we will ride to the shores of the moon We ride into night, with a storybook notion until dawn's cruel illusion swallows the dream... Where everything perfect, supreme and sublime, is hiding a secret that daylight denies ~ ___________________________________________

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Date: 3/23/2018 8:12:00 PM
What an extraordinarily charming and whimsical write - love it! Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved win, Carrie - blessings as always, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:38:00 PM
Amazing, Carrie, nicely done verse & great imagery.. Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:19:00 AM
Wow - a most deserving top win for your magically awesome poem. Beautiful, Carrie.
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I am dreaming, this is wonderfully penned, Kai
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Date: 3/21/2018 12:47:00 PM
Carrie, it was wonderful to read this once more and to see your amazing poem again with another top win! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/21/2018 2:25:00 PM
I'm glad to be in such fine company, Sandra! Thank you!
Date: 3/21/2018 12:00:00 AM
I want to thank you for entering my contest and congratulate you on your win! It was a tough contest to judge which is why there were multiple first placers. Carrie I really enjoyed this colorful story. This was definitely more jovial than most of the entries I chose, and not so much about a typical hallucination, I could not ignore the powerful story and fantastic writing in your poem. Well done and thank you!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/21/2018 2:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Brendan! I am honored to be among such amazing poets and glad you enjoyed this poem!
Date: 5/3/2015 3:56:00 PM
Congrats... wat a lovely piece. All the best
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Date: 4/30/2015 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie... SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2015 9:04:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your top win for this magnificent dreamy and mystical poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:18:00 PM
Carrie :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2015 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie!I can see why your piece is on the top win! Such seamless and detailed write. Hugs! Kim :) :)
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:18:00 PM
My goodness.....what a nice surprise, and honor, Rob. Thanks so much for inspiring this poem, ...strangely, it is similar to a dream that I've had. I think I know what it is all about.... (perhaps I need professional help lol !!) Thanks so much !!
Date: 4/28/2015 11:05:00 AM
Carrie: How I love your style. Congrats and thank you so much for entering.
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:39:00 PM
So mysterious Carrie I want to hear more. Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2015 11:37:00 AM
Carrie, your poem is dreamy and lovely,7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, my girl and me
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Date: 4/20/2015 7:25:00 PM
Oh my Lord Carrie.....Please let us know when your movie debuts 2016.....It will be starring Johnny Depp and Amanda Seyfried
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/20/2015 7:29:00 PM
I like your picks for the cast !! I suppose there has to be evil forces somewhere....hmm, wonder who it will be!

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