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I am a Grizzly Bear flag, with one star in the sky I'm a flag of the golden west I wave under skies, at the edge of a sea Over lands of the Pacific crest Where the mountains are tall, and the beaches are bright Where the valley's grow grain, stained with blood, sweat and pain Where such beauty unmatched, in a high mountain range and the Redwoods grow tall, far from Hollywood's fame California's Republic, had a lone star at hand Until a bear became known as the new source of pride I'm known far and wide, where the valley and tide has seen the pioneer come and a spirit so grand Representing a state, of the great Golden Gate And the state of the mind of the men who would fight To keep visions alive, shining regal and bright! I am snowcapped mountains that rise on the day I am the right to live, the right voice to pray I will not buckle beneath the strain of the fight I will keep honor strong, and my spirit in flight I am youthful ambition, in the restless spring breeze I am hope of a future, beneath the winter's eaves The colors I claim are proud to remain Green, red, brown, against white,.. and my name of the state that I claim is a home that I love I'm proud to bear witness to all the above
____________________________________________________ For The Contest Sponsored by Judy Konos 7/16/15 By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/9/2015 11:48:00 PM
Great to know about your national pride Carrie! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/9/2015 2:26:00 AM
What a strong, proud write Carrie. Love it. Congrats! Viv
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Date: 8/8/2015 10:54:00 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on your Flag win....... SKAT
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Date: 7/17/2015 3:29:00 PM
California give America some of the nations most creative people, I would be proud to live there too. Thanks for stopping by my verses! Light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2015 11:11:00 AM
California is such a collective array of variety. Right now, we pray for the drought conditions to turn around. Peace. :)
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Date: 7/17/2015 4:47:00 AM
A flag and a poem to be proud of and I so love the clever final line:-) good luck in the contest a top spot for sure:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/17/2015 12:08:00 AM
lovely words, Carrie, can hear the pride in your words....Seren
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