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California, I Love You

Crowning my state is a jewel in the bay A prized Golden Gate, is my bridge to the sky Life on the edge of a vast ocean wave I'll love California, until the day that I die For, this has been home since the day I was born On her glorious coastline, my soul is restored Redwoods so tall, where the eagles can soar Not to mention Sequoia's and Yosemite's lore I have it all, just a step out my door A land rich with gold, Mickey Mouse, and the shore! I love you California, land of plenty, land of many Land of vast cities, tall mountains, small valleys Over the years, I have seen other lands Varied they are, but I do understand Even though wonders are seen everywhere, You have them all and cannot be compared Only your sun makes me feel wild and free Until your next earthquake, shakes things up, even me !! ____________________________________________ 4/7/14 For Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Date: 4/22/2014 1:43:00 PM
Cute and wonderful dedication. Big congrats on your grand win.
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Date: 4/21/2014 11:25:00 AM
You honor your state with this beautiful tribute. Nicely done Yours are always winners. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 4/21/2014 9:33:00 AM
Write full of feelings and emotions, Congrats on the win, carrie
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Date: 4/21/2014 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations! Beautifully written; liked the little humor (?) at the end. Well done.
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:01:00 AM
Carrie this is simply beautiful and I quite agree. There is such diversity in the lovely state of California too. I grew up there during my formative years until 1980 before coming to live in Hawaii. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win!
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Date: 4/20/2014 11:41:00 PM
Carrie, beautifully written... Congratulations on you win... Verlena
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Date: 4/20/2014 11:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem,,, leaves one longing to visit ur place,, congrats on great win Carrie !
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Date: 4/20/2014 11:11:00 PM
A wonderful write and so your win, congrats dear...
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Date: 4/9/2014 8:02:00 AM
I've never been to California, but you make me want to visit!
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Date: 4/8/2014 6:57:00 PM
SO GOOD, Carrie. I lived there a while. Also the land of FRUITS and NUTs. haha. but it's all good!!!
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Date: 4/7/2014 8:47:00 PM
wonderful! i can feel the joy you have in living where you live and you've conveyed it so well. good luck in the contest.....
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:24:00 PM
I like it, Carrie. Love that California sunshine and breeze. I enjoyed my time up there. Beautiful palm trees, gorgeous shorelines, wonderful place. Can't say enough :)
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Date: 4/7/2014 4:57:00 PM
Very good write Carrie. gl in contest. Malta and California are said to be on level terms where temperature/ weather are concerned. Pity those tremors play around! :) // paul
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Date: 4/7/2014 3:54:00 PM
This is wonderful Carrie and it flows so well. You did California proud...hugs Tim
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