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Cake is the thing which betters ~ The leanness of my soul ~ And frosts ornate the naked plate ~ And pleases one ~ and all ~ And sweetest ~ is the bite ~ that's warm A sinful sugared slice ~ Though sorely adding to my form I shan't abash the price ~ I've tasted as a chilly dish ~ Eaten at dawn and noon ~ Yet ~ never ~ in regret or wish, I've left a crumb ~ too soon. 1/11/21 (a take on Emily Dickinson's poem 'Hope is the thing with feathers')

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Date: 8/11/2021 6:32:00 PM
This is delightful, Michelle! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 2/28/2021 5:29:00 PM
I can read this nice write without taking in any calories.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/28/2021 5:34:00 PM
Exactly - and zero sugar too :)
Date: 1/12/2021 3:49:00 PM
Perfect, Emily -- I mean, Michelle. Instant FAVE for this Emily Dickinson fan. Just LOVE it! Thanks, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/13/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thanks, I was inspired by the recent 'parody of a famous poem' contest - although I didn't compose this until after it closed, but it was still fun!
Date: 1/12/2021 11:18:00 AM
~ super nice! ~
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/13/2021 12:27:00 PM
As is cake! Thanks!
Date: 1/11/2021 12:59:00 PM
Oh I enjoyed this! ~x
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/13/2021 12:27:00 PM
Thanks, Mo :)
Date: 1/11/2021 12:29:00 PM
a sweet treat indeed, hope all is good with you and your family:-) hugs jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/13/2021 12:26:00 PM
As good as can be at the moment, thank you, Jan

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