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Cain's Dilemma

Evil broiled him changing his thoughts, and he perceived not The slow desiccation of his mind, how his brain infected rot From the poison of pride! More and more putrid he became Despising his brother for doing good, and jealousy riled him Into hatred darks vice, while self-willed that bright altar aflame Stood scorned by disobedience, with false sacrifice: a grim Portrait of man’s descent to sin: not even God’s awful voice Could deter the barbarous design, Cain had made his choice. Then innocent Abel came without questions or suspicions there To offer up the all of self, an unblemished lamb that may repair Vicariously his parents’ pagan practice, or alter man’s dark doom. And where he knelt t pray the savage succubus of a sinful knife Tore mercilessly through brotherly flesh, palling time with gloom. O dreadful dead to innocence done, O impious devouring of life! The treacherous act stained earth and time, and heckle our desire Pinning us with the wicked weight of memory, and fearful fire. And so forever on, that seed that Adam planted for his child Grows in the jungle of human heart, and bitter fruits most vile Is sucked in every age to come. Brothers against brothers, we Become fiends of slobbering greed, despising poor and weak In our haste for lucre’s filth and hegemony. O terrible tyranny, Dungeon hearted, dismal man, murderer of the pure, so bleak For you judgment growling at the end. O but worse, O Cain The torment of the fire, the end of wickedness is eternal pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 7:43:00 AM
How powerful and descriptive are your writes, very well done David.
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:05:00 AM
In regard to your comment and explaining that it was "their discription" I understand. Your are granted forgiveness, and I cherish you comments over my poetry a lot. May God bless. Thank you for being honest.
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:02:00 PM
YOU HAVE CHOSEN A VERY BAD LANGUAGE FOLLOWING YOUR COMMENTS REGARDING MY POEM MYTOWN. USING SEXUAL FANTACY IS AGAINST THE LAW. KEEP YOUR DIRTY WORDS TO YOURSELF.
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Date: 4/17/2009 7:04:00 PM
This is an incredible write from an incredible artist..brother you bring the words and the words makes joyful sounds dancing in the aisle of poetry ceremony...I bow in your presence as I witness a true artist..respect brother.
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Date: 4/17/2009 5:11:00 PM
Ahh, "My Beautiful Brother David!!!":):)~Oh, and I love "Your" biblical name....What an absolute amazing write dear brother~I have not read one written within "True Faith" like this, in a long long time!!!:):)~You took an old tale~And "The Holy Spirit," poured within "You" its 21rst century twist~Smile~"Beautiful David!!!":):)~"My Love Forever, To 'You and Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!!"~"Bye Beautiful Brother!!!":):) ~
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:50:00 PM
How right you are that Cain's murder of innocent Abel plays out again and again "in the jungle of human heart." This is one Bible story that has always filled me with deep sadness, David. Today we see children murdering parents, parents murdering children, and many other dispicable acts perpetrated on relatives by their kin. Excellent writing! Just wish man would have learned from this Bible lesson. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:44:00 PM
Enchore, enchore!-AA
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Date: 4/17/2009 1:47:00 PM
beautiful verse on humankind's shortcomings! extremely well written w/biblical overtones! cool!!! Jim ....oh, also thanks for comments! David...
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