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Cadborosaurus

When I was a child My father told me Of a wondrous creature He'd seen in the sea. In Lake Okanogan Ogopogo's the feature But here on our coast We have our own creature. Cadborosaurus is Our sea serpent's name. Not as famous as Nessie But here she has fame. October through April Is 'Caddy' watching season. She must like the cold For the water is freezin'. Marine biologists Have reports by the score But not one Cadborosaurus Has washed up on shore. So is she there Or is she not? I guess we won't know Unless she gets caught. My father believed That he'd seen our 'Caddy' So I believe in her too Because I believed my Daddy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/13/2011 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine 4th Place Win in the contest, Francine! Very interesting legend. Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carolyn, Francine
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Francine in the contest "Legends" sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:19:00 AM
Many Congratulations Francine on your 4th place win in this amazing contest.Enjoyed this. Gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:34:00 PM
Aww that last line is just so sweet-- loved how you ended this! You got me smiling and wondering about Caddy! Super congrats on your win, Francine-- really enjoyed reading this :)
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:43:00 PM
This legend is so cute! I love the nostalgic ending...Congratulations on your well deserverd win, dear Francine!!! Thanks for your nice comment too. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:03:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your big win in this contest with this great write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:39:00 PM
Great win Francine. This is one legend I have never heard of before. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:05:00 PM
Great Job Francine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's fourth place success. Loved it. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:51:00 PM
Many congrats, Francine, on your GREAT WIN! Wonderful story telling, INDEED!!! Lainie
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Date: 4/12/2011 1:10:00 PM
Congrats, Francine. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:33:00 PM
Many congrats, Francine : )
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:56:00 AM
A fascinating legend that both John and I enjoyed very much, Francine. I'd written previously about Ogopogo but was not familiar with the Cadborosaurus legend. Congratulations on taking fourth place in the contest. The competition was strong so you can be proud of your placement! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/8/2011 7:48:00 PM
Oh, I see how I got confused. My mistake. Sure would like to see the cadborosaurus! Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:36:00 AM
I am familiar with Ogopogo Francine. On TV one scientist said it was a prehistoric whale that only lives in this one lake now. You chose a very good topic and I would have believed my Daddy too. I am sending you a Soup mail. Good luck in the contest, Diane
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:37:00 PM
If you can't believe Daddy who can you believe? I bet he is there. Thanks for your comments on my Bigfoot. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:15:00 PM
my daddy told me something unbelievable and i believe him too. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 2/24/2011 3:24:00 AM
Very enjoyable and i do hope it is true!
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Date: 2/24/2011 3:11:00 AM
Hey this is super Francine. The end id endearing, All the best.
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:27:00 PM
superb use of rhyme, language and expressions, francine... delighted to learn about cadborosaurus! ... specil winning wishes if for a contest.:) huggs, nette
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