Cacophemism

I will open your hands to the blow of soot Foam around And the pejorative of illumination I am changing mistakes with your consciousness The number of exaltation Soot off the hands Ascribes oceans to winds I am distorting the image of reality Darkness is pejorative Because it does not expect illumination 2005

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Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:07:00 PM

NEL K, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Space Cadet

Date: 10/13/2016 4:56:00 PM

Hi Nel. This poem caught my eye on the new entries page, and I totally locked in on this. I had to look of the def of the title but I've studied some existentialism in the past..."I am changing mistakes with your consciousness" is made me think of "the problems of other minds". Then I linked the title to essence or the absence of essence and Buddhism and delusion and darkness...then I found this quote

Kara Gru
Date: 10/14/2016 3:26:00 AM

Thank you. Your interpretation is really good. This poem is a part of a larger collection I hope to publish.

Space Cadet
Date: 10/13/2016 5:07:00 PM

"What is the reality of things just as it is? It is the absence of essence. Unskilled persons whose eye of intelligence is obscured by the darkness of delusion conceive of an essence of things and then generate attachment and hostility with regard to them." And I immediately fell in love with how this reads aloud, and I realized how full this poem is, how it fills the emptiness, how it touches on nature, belief, the soul, and so many types of consciousness. (I feel embarrassed that I wrote all this.) It's quite deep. Thank you for sharing. W

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/9/2016 12:39:00 PM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........

Kara Gru
Date: 10/10/2016 4:29:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2016 4:47:00 PM

nel K, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kara Gru
Date: 10/10/2016 5:51:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words! My poetry touches on philosophy, psychoanalysis and symbolism, among other subjects. I've been writing for many years now and this particular poem was written when I was 16. My poetry allows me to create and at the same time access this new interesting world. Right now I'm ready to share my poetry with a wider audience. Thanks again!