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Brian Strand 1478

Cabernet Wings

Cabernet wings fluttering
   in a house of mirrors.
      The rotunda of cheers,
   just below the lip,
above the murkiness
      of a hospitality sip.
         Double dip nights,
   halfway through
conversation of the past;
   the sate of emotional till;
         tears flutter unexpectedly.
      Wings of quietude,
coalesce inside the glass,
   humoring an aunt and niece.
      Chasing away this insect-bird,
this apparition of Green Valley.
         Kin covers the glasses
   with smiles, lips and palms.
         Harrowing moments attach 
   themselves to memories,
cleverly; the moment itself
      vanishes, or does it remain
         an infinity ring,
   a nimbus of forever light
         and love in a holy place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Maverick Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 9:47 PM
Half and half..Life filterd with past acts And emotions.' What we expect ? What we live.' You have poured a glass of Prospects Kim..I think i have had one Too many already though.'
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 7:05 AM
Thank you, Joe! Cheers
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 3:13 PM
I thought I had read this one, but I guess I did not. Interesting lines penned for sure. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 9:05 PM
Sometimes, I have thought I read and commented. Hopefully our comments are not disappearing.
Poet Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 10:44 AM
Kim, your lines express your emotions profoundly. They seem to disappear, then they reemerge as nightfall approaches. Foggy moments surround our typical radiance and loyalty. This is Fave
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 9:06 PM
Thank you so kindly!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 3:07 PM
sometimes I find your poetic world 'entrancing'...a joy to read. Wishing you well, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 5:54 PM
Thank you, Sara! Glad you found this one to be to your liking!
Hind Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 5:30 PM
I feel a little tipsy after this one, lol- but then again, your poetry has that affect on me, another world- your world, <3 keeping up with your orbit, lol :)
Hind Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 4:17 PM
Hello, Kim!! Andrea told me that you had met up with her in Utah, and were talking about me, that I am a nice person :) thank you for that!! I hope you all had a splendid time together. <3 much love,
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 5:23 PM
LOL!
Guptar Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your win in this contest with a lovely poem reminiscing some past moments over a sip of fluttering Cabernet 'wings". Beautiful, concise opening verses , packed with imagery and depth. Wish you a pleasant new week.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 5:23 PM
Blessings, Krishnanand! Thank you!
Winter Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 7:28 AM
Dear Kim, this is so beautiful! I felt every emotion in your poem. Best, Anne
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 5:24 PM
Aww…thank you so much!
Chircop Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 6:43 AM
I was going to mention my favourite two lines,but there are too many to be able to choose from..Lovely
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 5:24 PM
Thank you kindly! Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 2:17 AM
Hi Kim, great poem. It lifted me in Wings of quietude. There is great depth in your thoughts.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 6:21 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
DiMino Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 5:26 PM
Not only my own deeper self, often not entirely known...but sometimes it is the feelings of a person across the room I do not even know, or a person that just walked into the room -- deep felt vibrations affect us all. Mind and spirit are not subject alone to local atmosphere. We are connected by spirit in many intangible ways. Blessings my friend. You are a poet of poets. Great writing!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 7:59 PM
Thank you for your kind words! So appreciated!
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 10:33 AM
The depth of your emotions is deeply felt in your lines, Kim. Those moments seem to vanish, but it's only temporary for they always return when a titch of darkness creeps in. With those cloudy moments also comes the light and love we've shared. I really like this exposure of your thoughts.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Thank you so much, Lin!
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 10:22 AM
- Lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Graham Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 8:25 AM
Nice moment!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, James!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Thank you, James!
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