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~ Changes ~ (Double Take 6's 5's and 4's) Pray for love peace today Love comes from Lord see He will set you free Help see better each day He'll change your heart And hold your hand God hears your plea Soul can be free With Lord have choice With God get love hope peace Things better you know When troubles stir so With him you can win race He'll change your heart And hold your hand Sing songs each day Praise His name too In Lord rejoice. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 September.16.16 -So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV) -“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life. John 3:16 (NIV) ~Authors notes: The " Double Take 6's 5's And 4's " is a poetry style created by Dena M. Ferrari.

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Date: 9/16/2016 12:52:00 PM
- A lovely poem, as always Dorian :) - Best wishes and a delightful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/17/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it all dear friend.Sending you my love n' prayers always.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D

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