C L O U D S - the Hop Scotch Style

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~Clouds~ (Hop-Scotch) Clouds are nice and take many shapes If you don't believe take a look They travel fast and can reshape Clouds I see like a picture book Sometimes see angels or an ape Observe in sky they can't escape They're great to watch from site or nook Clouds fantastic God's creation Benefit man are here to stay They're like marshmallows in motion Moving fast or slow in clear day They look so soft and bring emotion Clouds bring rain can cause commotion But they're fun to watch any way. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 October.13.2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2016 5:09:00 PM

Lovely imagery and photos. I took some lovely photos of clouds on Sunday:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/15/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:) Hugs!D

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/13/2016 4:40:00 PM

I like that. Thanks

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/15/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Heidi, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D