Valsa George Poet Free verse

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July- 30- 2025

Sense of Taste Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Nette Onclaud

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By the Streetlamp

on our way back from a trip,
got down by the bright streetlamp.
hunger raged, bowels rumbled.
the inviting smell of food,
wafted from nearby cafe.
noodles and spicy meat fry,
with a cup of steaming tea,
titillated our palate. 

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Rowena Velasco August 3, 2025 at 6:52 AM This paints such a real and cozy scene—could almost smell the food and feel that late-night hunger hit! Simple moments like this make the best memories. Loved the warm, sensory vibe.

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2025 at 8:58 AM Great way to say that last line. I was hoping to get palate into my poem as well but never managed to. Congrats on the win

Sotto Poet August 2, 2025 at 1:40 AM Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win, Valsa.

Krishnanand Guptar August 1, 2025 at 11:45 PM Congratulations, Valsa, on your win in this contest with a nice verse on the sense of taste with a plateful of savoury dishes. Wishing you a savoury weekend.

Bj Legros Kelley July 31, 2025 at 4:34 PM Very nice Valsa! Mmmm I can almost smell the delicious aroma!

Sara Kendrick July 31, 2025 at 4:23 AM Awesome that you enjoyed the food and experience. My husband isn't one to try new places very often but sometimes it is fun to do. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar July 31, 2025 at 3:41 AM We usually have such fare during summer, especially when some fiesta is on. Lovely poem dear Valsa.

Sotto Poet July 31, 2025 at 1:39 AM Dear Valsa, What mouthwatering poetry! Thanks to your exceptional talent and magnetic presence, you nailed this imaginative poem. I hope you come out on top.

Bill Baker July 30, 2025 at 9:50 PM You made my tummy grumble, and it's too late to eat again tonight. Excellent poetry, Valsa. You made it real. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Hugs, Bill

sara Etgen-Baker July 30, 2025 at 5:22 PM what scrumptious words anda delightful read & the perfect contest entry. You should place well, dear Valsa. hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues July 30, 2025 at 1:46 PM …hunger raged, our bowels gnarled… mighty hungry… hugs

Joe Maverick July 30, 2025 at 12:31 PM You will be glowing like the lamp...With more Verve for the homeward tramp.' I hope you get A worthy win.' You'll be a real vervy Valsa Then...So do let me know if you get 'that look in'

Jay Narain July 30, 2025 at 11:23 AM After a trip, delicious food and nice poem.

Joseph P. DiMino July 30, 2025 at 8:44 AM Some of the best food I every tasted was street vendor food. Love it! Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 30, 2025 at 7:56 AM - You did it, Valsa ... excellent :) - Best wishes :) - hugs

Anne Winter July 30, 2025 at 6:15 AM Dear Valsa, This is an absolutely delicious poem! Best, Anne :)