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28.07.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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SENSE OF TASTE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

5th place in the contest

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- By The Streetlamp -


                               Those pancakes look delicious
                             Street food under the street lamp
                                 just right around the corner
                              The sweet scent wafts in the air
                               that fills the mouth with water
                                     Perceived as satisfying
                               Freshly baked with strawberry
                                  ... closer to heaven feeling
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Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Great picture as well
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Ahhh a sweet one! Congrats, Anne-lise
Poet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 1:38 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win, Anne-Lise
Guptar Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:03 AM
Congratulations poet friend on your win in this contest with a lovely verse on delicious pancakes, with their sweet scents wafting the air. These fill my mouth with water , too. Wishing you a delicious weekend.
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 3:59 PM
Nice one. Congrats.
Babcock Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 3:03 PM
It is getting close to supper and now you have me wanting strawberry and whipped cream pancakes. lovely poem. love phyl
Maverick Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Delicate phrasology Anne Lise, just as the Fancys i now percieve.'
George Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 4:34 AM
I found this contest challenging. So haven't thought of entering it. Anne, you have hit the nail on the head. All the best. Hugs!
Winter Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 2:47 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, food tastes 10 times better under the moonlight or street lamplight, I don't know why but it's like magic. Lovely poem! Best, Anne
DiMino Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Yep, fastest way to my heart, is through my stomach. Love it!
Fleming Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 2:40 AM
Lovely poetry, Anne-Lise. This I find ever so appealing. Enjoyed! :) john
Singh Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:54 PM
Beautiful ! Wish you the best
Baker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:30 PM
Sweet Streetlamp poem for the contest, my friend. Good Luck! Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:27 PM
What a fabulous take for the contest! I think this one is a winner for sure. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
Bauer Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 2:48 PM
you've described this so well, anne-lise, that my mouth is watering! best of luck in the contest...
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:19 PM
What a wonderful write you have here. Love your great picture. Now I want pancakes. You cooking??? Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hugs... Have a fun day eating and writing away..........
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:58 AM
mm delicious! hugs jan xx
Poet Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Very well composed with many wonderful layers of imagery and thoughts, Anne-Lise, I wish you the best for the contest.
Parker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Right on point dear poet, reads like a winner
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