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By the Old Oak

If you saw me today by the old Oak lazing in the sun, with my hair tangled from the stiff breeze, with eyes solemn and dark, And if I saw you too, with a crooked smile hanging long across my face, with my head cocked against the empty sky, And standing there we saw each other, with my thoughts blank and yours racing, with my heart still and yours ever pounding, With a gnarled rope around my bruised neck, swaying Would you leave me hanged, or cut me down and mourn?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/23/2015 11:01:00 PM
Hi Boskov, was hoping to find a second poem from you. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 11:36:00 PM
Boskov, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:31:00 PM
Boskov, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:24:00 PM
Hi Boskov, this is such an excellent first posting - sad but brilliant piece! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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