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Young Lovers by the Lily Pond, by Suzette Richards – image generated 19/2/2024


 

As Moon dipped in behind the crag, his countenance devoid of smile: A gargoyle that empathy lag in its features, rugged and vile, and given to malevolence. Echoes of criticism received, totally lack benevolence. From mankind and love cleaved. As Moon snuck form behind the crag, her face lit up in beauteous smile: A fair maiden not wont to lag, nor given over to being vile, totally lack malevolence. Echoes of compliments received, she’s given to benevolence. To mankind and love cleaved. A wondrous occurrence indeed when Selene waved her magic wand. Now her smile had frozen heart freed to embrace by the Lily Pond.

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Date: 3/5/2024 12:50:00 PM
Enchanting one. Congrats for the Fantasy win.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/5/2024 11:16:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 2/29/2024 10:33:00 AM
Magical and very romantic, Suzette! Truly love does set the frozen heart free. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/29/2024 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Sam :)
Date: 2/27/2024 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Fantasy contest. Your poem was a pleasure to read.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/27/2024 10:09:00 PM
Thank you for the placement in an interesting contest, Chetta.
Date: 2/20/2024 9:41:00 AM
Great poem. Aesthetic and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing................peace!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/20/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thank you, Ricky

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