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By Degrees

Spilling from the lintel, a pitcher saves the ice from anonymity. Rafters creak, the sounds of winter rattle through the cabin eerily. Memories of dead and gone, whistles of wind, the monotony whispers and drags through the days like a chilling lament. Hours burn so slowly, like embers refusing to ebb, reminiscences stutter and fade, no lasting testament. Evenings and mornings now bleed with the same deep regret; he's losing all feeling, as cold as cold can get.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/29/2016 12:45:00 AM
An intriguing write indeed Keith, I draws you deeper with hints, and then more descriptive notes.'
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/29/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank Joe! much appreciated, Keith
Date: 4/20/2016 5:13:00 PM
this is wonderful, keith - it creates such a mournful mood. i love the "embers refusing to ebb" line. it feels familiar, though - have you posted it before?
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/21/2016 12:31:00 PM
I'm afraid so... my bad! Thanks for reviewing AGAIN! Best wishes, Keith

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