By Degrees

Spilling from the lintel,
a pitcher saves the ice from anonymity.
Rafters creak, the sounds of winter
rattle through the cabin eerily.

Memories of dead and gone,
whistles of wind, the monotony
whispers and drags through the days
like a chilling lament.
Hours burn so slowly,
like embers refusing to ebb,
reminiscences stutter
and fade, no lasting testament.

Evenings and mornings 
now bleed with the same deep regret;
he's losing all feeling,
as cold as cold can get.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Maverick Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 12:45 AM
An intriguing write indeed Keith, I draws you deeper with hints, and then more descriptive notes.'
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Thank Joe! much appreciated, Keith
Bauer Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 5:13 PM
this is wonderful, keith - it creates such a mournful mood. i love the "embers refusing to ebb" line. it feels familiar, though - have you posted it before?
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 12:31 PM
I'm afraid so... my bad! Thanks for reviewing AGAIN! Best wishes, Keith
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