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By Candlelight

Shadows of contempt spark the walls, In which eternity calls, Each billowing flick emanates towards the pall Of you – I feel enthralled. Sweet intrusion I feel it, covered like a shawl Innocent sparks devoured to see me fall As every beat sees you closer - I stall Yet this only makes you dearer to all. Candle light putter brakes you, turns me tall With this I shall let resistance be my down fall. By Candlelight by Bethany Chipperfield

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/9/2012 11:26:00 AM
"Go not gentle into the night..." I like your poem! Your poem reminds me of how much life will always resist death. The fact that there is no life with out death, light with out darkness, is a constant reminder the older one gets or the more death we daily see.
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Date: 3/6/2012 11:40:00 AM
Sweet and romantic poem, I liked it alot Bethany. Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Bethany Chipperfield
Date: 3/6/2012 11:50:00 AM
aww thankyou that means a lot :) have a lovely day too...love beth xox

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