By a Wall

By a Wall

She loved him,
yes loved the scrambled little guy
She was so careful
that’s no lie
She kept him cool
so he wouldn’t fry
But Humpty Dumpty
he had a thing for being high
Then that fateful day
he tried to fly
Oh me oh my
WHY? why? w h y?

The King he sent them.
Yes, all of his men…
I heard they couldn’t 
put Humpty Dumpty together again.
So the Princesses held him,
her cracked mind in pain.
She’d never love 
a good egg again.

Strands of her hair
wrapped around his shell.
She picked up every piece that fell.
This part is sad 
yet still I must tell,
all loves that start
do not end well.
She became woefully lost 
when Humpty fell.
Some say that egg-shelled dude,
enchanted her with a magic spell.
But now he’s gone 
and her as well,
buried by a wall 
near a lovely dell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Greenhough Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:45 PM
I loved the poem. It was amazing to finally discover the Humpty Dumpty ending. Thanks.AC4
Ricci Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 3:31 AM
Hello Richard. Good Morning. I like titles and I like this one before us. Never did you stray from the concept. The was creative and well thought out. Thank you for sharing your writing talent. Have a wonderful weekend. Take Care (smile)
Babcock Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Nicely written taking a nursery rhyme and expanding on it. Enjoyed. love phyl
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 4:12 AM
Thanks Phyllis.
Dutta Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 11:34 PM
Lovely write. Really enjoyed. Have Good Days.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Thanks for reading.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:53 PM
This is so cool putting in those nursery rhyme metaphors. A fave
Lamoureux Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Hi Andrea, thanks. It was a fun one to write.
Daniel Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 3:36 AM
A whimsical poem, Richard, glad to see you posting again:)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Hi Joanna, thanks for the read and comment.
Poet Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Beautiful work, Richard. This piece commences with a sense of enchantment, only to culminate in a poignant manner. The evocative portrayal of her tresses entwined around his carapace is truly captivating. It brings me great joy to witness your return to Soup platform, as your absence had been sorely felt, dear Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Hi Sotto, what a nice thing to say. Much appreciated.
Downing  Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Lol! Great one, Richard. Been awhile but good to come back and read yours again. Hope all is well.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Hi Akkina, so nice to have you visit and comment. I am well, thanks for asking. I hope you are also well.
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Well done Richard, not the poem that's how I like my eggs lol! Welcome back!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 3:05 PM
Thanks for giving it a read John.
Faulkner Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 10:48 AM
This starts so whimsically yet ends so sadly, really like the image of her hair wrapped around his shell, p.s. am happy to see a new one from you, it's been awhile~
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Hi Michelle, thanks for this great response.
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