Buzzy the Bumble Bee

Buzzy the busy bumble bee
Has his sharp sting on aim at me.
"If you want my honey
Then show me your money.
Buzzy the bee does not work free."






For Carolyn's and John's bug contest

Tied for no.3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 10:17 PM
by the way, never said congrats on this one. About my footles, I have been posting so many poems, they are not getting read very much each one, but I promise I will post more footle soon! thanks for asking. Luv, andrea
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August 7, 2010 at 6:19 PM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Limerick contest ..with this really good one.. enjoy another victory my friend..with luv..
Roberts Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:36 AM
cute one , congrats on your win
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 3:54 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 2:37 PM
This was so cute.Thanks for your very kind comment on my win Joyce.Teresa
Freeman Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on Buzzy, Joyce. Great ideal. Enjoyed. Agape, Moses
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Many congratulations Joyce on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem >> James
Taylor Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Congrats, Joyce. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol
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August 6, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Joyce, you really give the men a run for their money in your limericks. Excellent! Congrats on placing third! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 3:45 AM
Good luck in the contest with the unique write..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 5:14 PM
GOOD ONE, and dang it, I missed this contest. LUv, Andrea
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